Counting Down

Counting Down

 

The second a person is born, a number appears on their arm. Not just any random number like 7 or 23 or 89. It's a number that shows how many years, months, weeks, days, hours, and seconds you have until you meet the one. Your soul mate. Your significant other. There are many different names for it, but they all mean the same thing. When your number reaches zero, you meet them. The one person who completes you. Your other half.
 
When your a toddler, you don't even notice it. You don't care about the small blue numbers quietly ticking down to nothing.
One thing is very strange though: no one has ever known their soul mate before their time hits zero. The first time you lay eyes on them is when the clock runs out. Nobody knows why.
 
Something that's really popular now is the Cover. The best way to describe it is like this: if you want it, you can have a weird black square cover your number. You can't take it off once you have it (even if you want to), and when you have about five minutes left on your clock, it falls off.
 
Your mom told you about how she met your dad. She was 15, and she was in the middle of her gym class when her Cover fell off. The teachers let her leave class and run to the small strip mall across the street. Bad things happened if you tried to stop someone from going somewhere in their last five minutes.
 
Anyways, your mom told you how nervous and panicked she was. 'What if he doesn't like me?' She kept thinking. People around her noticed how worried she was and they knew what she was going through, so they encouraged her. She told you that she felt the world stop when she saw your father. She never went into much more detail after that.
 
You turned 16 two weeks ago and you was starting to get worried. People's numbers usually counted down to zero by age 15, yet there you were with that stupid Cover, unable to see how much longer you would have to wait. Your friends had convinced you when you were eleven to get the Cover with them, and (stupidly) you agreed.
 
You flopped down onto your bed and looked at the blue and brown polka-dotted walls.
 
'Great. Maybe I will be forever alone,' You sulked to your stuffed bear, Rufus. Usually you wouldn't be inside on a beautiful Saturday afternoon, but all of your friends were out with their soul mates, and you were definitely NOT going to be the third wheel.
Suddenly, you got the strangest craving ever: raspberry ice cream. It was strange because you hate raspberry, and only two shops in town sold it. Sighing, you grabbed your wallet and headed out the door.
 
As you hopped into your car, a tingling sensation rippled through your body, and your Cover fell off, revealing the numbers 00:00:00:07:43.
 
"Seven minutes?!" You shrieked and, as if you were trapped in a trance, you pulled out of your driveway and sped towards your favorite ice-cream shop.
 
You arrived at the shop few minutes later. Since you had four minutes left, you ordered a double scoop raspberry cone and sat at a table while you waited. The girl who was serving you looked up from scooping the ice-cream.
 
"You nervous?" She asked you and you gave her a fast, jerky nod. The girl giggled and handed the ice cream into your shaking hands. "Don't worry. When it hits zero you'll be happier than you've ever been in your entire life."
 
You stare and the girl and strangely, you feel comforted by her words. On impulse, you looked down at the tiny blue numbers and gasped.
 
01:28
 
Barely a minute and a half left?! You feel yourself beginning to panic and frantically cram half the ice cream into your mouth.
 
01:04
 
You look around the ice cream shop anxiously and suddenly feel the urge to step outside. As if you were being pulled by an invisible string, you quickly stride out the door and pace along the sidewalk.
 
00:49
 
Now I understand what  Mom was talking about. This is terrifying. You think and search the streets around you.
 
00:36
 
People walking past you gave you encouraging smiles and an old couple mouthed 'Fighting!' to you. You nervously smile back and you swear you can hear your heart is pounding.
 
00:22
 
Oh god, what if he doesn't like me? What if I end up not having a match? I'm going to end up alone! These thoughts popped into your head and your brain went into overdrive.
 
00:10
 
What's he like?
 
00:08
 
He won't like me!
 
00:06
 
I'll be forever alone.
 
00:04
 
Please just let it happen already!
 
00:02
 
Ohmygodthisisreallyhappeningrightnow-
 
00:00
 
When it finally reached zero, your heart froze. I knew it. I'm not matched with anyb-
 
Suddenly, you felt someone crash into you from behind, sending you sprawling onto your knees. You turn around to see the most handsome boy you've ever see in your life.
 
Both of you froze as you looked at each other, then at your arms.
 
00:00:00:00:00
 
There was a faint beeping noise and the blue zeros faded away. Looking back up into the boys eyes, you stopped breathing. He was perfect. His eyes were a dark mahogany, his blond hair swept off to the side of his face, and you noticed his sharp jawline had dropped.
 
"Hi," you whisper, "I'm ____."
 
"I-I-I'm Daehyun," the boy stuttered, "a-are you my soulmate?"
Your eyes filled with tears of joy and you threew your arms around his neck.
"It's nice to finally meet you Daehyun," you smiled into his shoulder when he hugged you tightly back.
 
"So, _____, we should hang out some time," Daehyun joked and you laughed. You had met your soulmate, and you felt complete in every way.
 

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cece_mytlover
#1
Chapter 1: i liked it :)
geniie123
#2
It was a short but cute story!! ^^
A very unique storyline as well~!
Great job! :D
littlemrstaro97
#3
Chapter 1: :DDD Even though Daehyun is not my bias (Probably will be lol), I smiled like an idiot while reading this. :3
This story is so unique~ I love it!
Great job~ :D
dorkybaby
#4
Chapter 1: Omonie this one shot was so unique! ♥
VietPrincess #5
Chapter 1: Cute, cute, cute! Good job :)
hyogyeong #6
Chapter 2: this story is amazinggggg.
i really love it xD
never thought a story like this before. really great .
keep up the good work !! :)
MsXXlovelyXx
#7
Chapter 1: I almost love the basic of the story ! ^_^ ♥
MitsuKyuYamazaki #8
Chapter 2: ^^ great job~
Sheenatrisia
#9
Wasent their a moive about this? I watched it on netflex it was called "TIMER". But I still love the story line of it all, you should have more stories along the lines
sleepies #10
Chapter 2: i love your idea--the soulmate timer. really original. :)