Chapter 1: It's good! I liked you're oneshot it was easy to read and a easy to understand plot. But I you don't mind me saying, for your next stories could you break the dialogue up a big? I was reading this on my phone and it's difficult to read one long paragraph. But all in all I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing And keep writing! xoxo =^__^=

Chapter 1: waaaaaah~~ so sad :c keep up the good work!! ^^

Chapter 1: Pleaseee be nice to mee! This is my first Fic and I'm kind of lost... Don't forget to coment! (⌒▽⌒)