TOP's Time of the Month ft. BIGBANG

YG Chat Room {Totally Chaos}

Cold_Rapper logged on.

victorypanda logged on.

Sun_Sol logged on.

IBGRDRN logged on.

DaeDaeDoraemon logged on.


Cold_Rapper: Alas, it is the time when all falls and one person has no choice...

victorypanda: wtf hyung?

IBGRDN: It's his time of the month~

DaeDaeDoraemon: seunghyun hyung is a female?

victorypanda: what the actual...?

Sun_Sol: It's his tim of the month.

victorypanda: you type slow.

victorypanda: and you have a typo too.

Cold_Rapper: I am not a female, my fellow bandmates.

DaeDaeDoraemon: Hyung....?

IBDRGN: He is not a female. He gets angsty every month.

victorypanda: ............waeyooooooooooooooo?

DaeDaeDoraemon:...............................waeyooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo?

IBDRGN: No idea.

Sun_Sol: He isn't a female he's just angsty.

DaeDaeDoraemon: UMF HYUNG xD

IBDRGN:...I am disappointed in you Taeyang.

Cold_Rapper: Alas, how slow thou sun types!

vicctorypanda: Wake up hyung.

victorypanda has logged off.

DaeDaeDoraemon:....Is that slapping sounds I hear.

IBDRGN: MAKNAE IS SLAPPING SEUNGHYUN HYUNG gogogogo help him!

DaeDaeDoraemon: Come HELP, Taeyang!

Taeyang: I'm sorry Jiyong....

IBDRGN has logged off.

DaeDaeDoraemon has logged off.

Cold_Rapper has gone idle.

Sun_Sol: Okay guys I'm coming!

Sun_Sol: I finally finished typing! 

Sun_Sol: .....It's over already.....sigh.

Sun_Sol has logged off.


IDK.

might discontinue

#no inspiration

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limeelf
#1
Chapter 3: Again you having me laughing. I think though to up the details of being in a chat room you can add more details. Like Sun_Sol is typing... added in a few times would definitely make him seem slower. It's harder to put in action when they're doing it off screen so you have to use the order to your advantage. You can even pepper in some suspense by having the various characters trying to type faster if they're arguing and the reader can see it as 'Sun_Sol is typing' along with everyone else actually typing and sending messages at a normal rate.
limeelf
#2
Chapter 1: This is hilarious. Hmmmm...let me think...you could make it even less formal. I'd assume they all would know each other fairly well so maybe you could up the petty drama? It's a chat room so there could be more than one topic (like lost headphones) going and having it even crazier with CL trying to get them to pay attention to her while they are talking about what's for dinner or something. Just a thought.
silverwish
#3
Chapter 3: Do one about CL discussing her photo of taeyang with the other YG family members!
valeintines
#4
Chapter 1: I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THIS XDDDDD
jiosne #5
Chapter 1: LOL!!! THIS IS SO FUNNY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON~
mother-chucker
#6
Wat is PSY's username?? -.-
Woofanynminyul4ever #7
you know you guys should totally update soon ==
jiosne #8
Please update~