Is there a chaptered fic?

hey please give me the link to the chapter-ed version

Well actually i tried to write a comment for you for the third time right now but it was always not uploaded! -.-
What i wanted to say was: its kind of weird to imagine that hyukkie is a child trapped in a mans body.. but neeeh.. just foeget what i said earlier, he and donghae ARE children trapped in really hot men bodies :P at least they behave like this sometimes.. but i like your fic :)

Chapter 1: its so lovely , I like it ^^

Chapter 1: Wow. This is great. I wish it was chaptered though.. :)

Chapter 1: Wow. This is great. I wish it was chaptered though.. :)

Chapter 1: Omo~ this is so beautiful I wanna cry *sobs*
Just... Perfect.... Really love it ♥

Chapter 1: It was short but it have many feeling
Great One shot
thank you a lot

Chapter 1: it's so touching!...I think it was short, but I can't imagine it longer...it's really cool just like that.
I'm waiting for the other fics ^^

Chapter 1: I'm so glad hae loves hyuk for eternity ! Luckily hae managed to tolerate with hyuk's cute behaviour but if he didn't ,, i will volunteer to do it xD . Thanks so the the update btw ^^v