It must be your smile

Description

A short fic about the five times Yongguk smiles at Junhong.

Fluffy (?) high school au~

 

Based on this prompt:

3.

Object/Word Prompts: smiles, big softy, secret glances, Zelo's curly blond hair (Which I looove)

Place: high school

Action: Zelo enters a new school and Yongguk notices him right away because of his smile but Zelo is wary and shy of Yongguk since he is the schools bad boy and everyone avoids him since he is well known for having a temper. But one day Zelo sees Yongguk smile and suddenly wants that smile to be because of him.

Dislikes: angst with no happy ending, really horrible stuff happening to either Zelo or Yongguk

Other Notes: Any rating would be fine. I would like a kiss. And a spazzy Himchan in the background would make me happy since he was in the mv as well. Himchan knows best!

 

Foreword

written for Banglo writing fest~

(it's gonna be uploaded there too as soon as obsidiansapphire gets back online and everything. i'm being impatient lol, sorry. but i have permission \o/)

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tryingtoread #1
Chapter 1: I like this story so much!
pricomigda #2
Chapter 1: Soo squishy! Loved it!
Mikki_Rin #3
Chapter 1: "he knows Yongguk will be there to catch him" Heeell yeaah!! I'm dead. It was so amazing, wonderful, so fluffy and sweet omg. Woah I can't handle it.
starlit_vip_melody #4
Chapter 1: "I just need to be aroung more often to catch you when you fall." Nope. I'm done. I can't do this. I can't do cheesy cute things like this. They make me cry. I get too emotional. It's frickin 2:30 in the morning and I'm crying over fictional stories, I'm just gonna go to bed. Nope, bye.
bambi97 #5
Chapter 1: pleasee sequell Yongguk POV
b2astly #6
Chapter 1: ungh this was awesome!! i can just imagine yongguk's pov too! great story, great way to work the prompt. loved every second of it!
_Vide_ #7
Chapter 1: AW ;A;

OMG WHY THIS STORY IS SO ADORABLE ;A; TOO CUTE, TOO PERFECT ;A;
eternal #8
Chapter 1: it was freaking great...not too long or short,perf lenght,awesome
leeminhyunqs #9
i'm not really a bangzelo shipper, but skdjhfkjs this fic is all too much. it's so adorable ; u ;
sanscherif #10
Chapter 1: UNNIE. OMGAH. This is too adorable for words!:) I especially loved the way you wrote Junhong's flurry of thoughts back there--it's as if I can almost feel the urgency, that experience of having butterflies wildly fluttering in my stomach, and just forgetting how to breathe.:3

Although I'd love to see more dialogue from the nosy Himchan and maybe a blunt teasing from the sassy guy himself, you did awesome on your take on the challenge! I super loved how Yongguk and Junhong played around with the concept of 'falling' as well.:3

Good job, good job on this, unnie!:D I'm looking forward to reading more of your works! Woohoo!
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