X: The Story

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He went by the name X. He was a serial killer. Chief Bang Yong Guk and rookie investigator Kim Himchan will do anything to stop X from killing more. Join the investigation as they try to unravel the true identity of X. 

Foreword

Title: X: The Story

Genre: Crime

Description: After recieving a frightening letter from a serial killer, investigator Bang Yong Guk and rookie investigator Kim Himchan try to unravel the real identity of cold killer 'X'

Characters: Bang Yong Guk, Kim Himchan

Side characters: X, B.A.P, some original characters

Chapters: 8 + Epilogue

Hello there! It's been a long time since I've wrote something, but here I am again with a special treat for all of you.  This time I'm featuring B.A.P and Bang Yong Guk as the main character! This is going to be 8 chapters long. I pre-summarized each chapter so it's easier for me to update. I'll be posting at least 2 times a week, maybe 1 time a week. So please look forward!  

 

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stellarstarlight #1
Chapter 1: its so interest! i like it
Mangooey #2
Chapter 1: ^^ Thanks for the feedback. It is much appreciated. I fix some of it, not realizing it was there. That's why you need a second person to go back and edit it for you =_=;. Ha.

Anyway, I hope you continue to read and tell me what you think overall. :)
SaturnXK #3
Chapter 1: Be careful of your grammar. New speaker = new line. You don't need to capitalise the 'm' when you write 'Good morning'. And remember to use commas, otherwise sentences become run-on.

Otherwise, the plot looks pretty okay so far. Maybe build up a little more tension when the killer has the girl? Like, describe the setting more a little bit, liken her fear to something. Show us exactly how terrified the victim is.
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