Chapter 1: I like them. But, you can tell the girls are Asian, in my story they are Puerto Ricans(Which are Americans). If you can't find less obvious girls then can you take the girls out.
There are two girls characters, if you want to incorporate the girls, you can. However they are NOT Asian, they ARE american. Please use a picture that does NOT show their faces. Thank you.
Relationship of characters: They are all friends, no couples. No bias.
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