Pieces of You Review Shop *Batch #1 Closed*

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 "Pieces Of You"  
                        "Morning is my favorite time of day. It's like everything's starting out fresh and new.
                         I begin to get sad around noontime, and I hate it when the sun goes down. I live with
                         those same things day after day." -Naoko, Norwegian Wood (Haruki Murakami)

»[Shop]«

 

Hello, and welcome to Pieces of You Review Shop.
This shop is run by a number of authors including; SummersDay; elisaexplosive; ohmysnappleshakes; and Empire.
At times, we are strict on certain reviews. This is simply to benefit you all.
If you are going to be hurt or sensitive, this is probably not the right shop for you.

All of our authors are open to all types of stories. We accept 'Rated M' stories, and stories.
We do not mind, so do not hesitate to bring your stories in for reviews.
We will not, however, review stories with more than twenty-one chapters.
This is for the benefit of our eyes and our minds--Especially if the story is, and please forgive me for my choice of words, poorly written.

We do not like to be rushed, and we will get to this more in the rules, obviously.
We have lives just like you all. So, please do not rush us and be patient.
It's just that simple.

If you need anything else clarified, please contact one of the reviewers.
 
»[Rules]«
Rules are simple. Please follow them.

-Subscribe to us once you have requested for a review.
If you subscribe, you will know when your review has been finished.

-We wil not review a story with more than (0-21) chapters.
We will just simply not review your story. Sorry.
Try sending in a shorter one.

-If you have a oneshot, please turn off "Disallow Text Selection".
I, SummersDay, use Microsoft Office to review oneshots.
It catches grammar and spelling better than I do.
*It benefits the both of us in the end.*

-Your story needs to be completed.
How will we review something that has not been finished yet?
Make sure your story is complete. Please.

-We appreciate the time you took to bash the reviewers or others, but it is not needed here.
Whine somewhere else.

-We accept and all genres of stories.

-No upvote or credit is needed.
But if you want to be generous, then go ahead and credit us somewhere in your description/foreword.

Upvote as well, if you please.


»[Rubric]«
»Description/Foreword
This area focuses on the appearance of your description and foreword.
Does your description and foreword contain what it should?


»Title
This area is not focused on as much as everything else.
If something needs to be pointed out, it will.
This is the shortest area of your whole review.
State otherwise if you'd like us to focus here more.


»Plot
The setup of your story; pretty simple, right?


»Creativity/Originality
Was your story original, or was it on the border of being cliche?


»Flow
Does your story have a good flow? Does everything go together and make a lot of sense?
Did the plot advance too slow or too fast?


»Characterization
Are your characters developed?


»Style
What is your style of writing like?
 
»[Form]«
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Story Title:
Story Link:
Rated?
Genre:
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dokyungsoo7491
#1
(For batch 2?)
Username:dokyungsoo7491
Story Title:Restless Requite
Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/362250
Rated?PG
Genre:Drama/Love/Action-ish
Any area you want to focus on more than others?
nah
justkeeponswimming
#2
Username: justkeeponswimming and shayleely
Story Title: Promises
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/268607/promises-death-key-minho-shinee-ocs-angstromance
Rated? PG
Genre: Angst, death and romance
Any area you want to focus on more than others?
Plot
exothermc
#3
Chapter 7: um, uh. i don't know what to say but i agree with the comment below.
thanks again. i'll credit you.
baeklightful
#4
Chapter 7: I'm fairly sure that the author of 'The Rain of Sound' written her one-shot in lapslock, which is a writing style when a writer does not capitalise any of her words. I think it's merely a writing style. The author does know how to capitalise things.
HansolLover
#5
Chapter 4: Wow!
You guys did the best review of my story.
It was really realistic.
Unlike other reviews, your review was honest.
A reviewer told me it's wrong not to show the character's name. I wanted to ask you, is it wrong?
I know that it was wrong of me to put the badwriting tag, but :c I'm so not confident.
Another reviewer told me this was cliche :s
Lastly, do you think I should continue posting stories here?
And I think that my writing is too childish for my age, is it true?
Thank you again! I really loved the review <3
douxsoleil #6
Omg you use naoko's saying as a quote omggg
seungcheollies
#7
Username: aisyahkpop
Story Title: Your Husband is a...NERD!?
Link of Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/412969/your-husband-is-a-nerd-fluff-romance-ulzzang-exo-cute-kris
Characters: Ulzzang Seuk Hye and Kris EXO-M
Genre: Comedy, Romance
Reviewer Choice: Anyone
(?)Any Questions: English is not my first language so sorry for grammar mistakes..
the_happy_me
#8
Username : Amylya09
Story tittle : Only You
Link of story : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/345834
Character :all 2PM members, OC
Genre : Comedy, Romantic
Reviewer choice : I don't mind
(?) Any Question :Actually not a question... I really weak in grammar and sometimes I spell wrong... I want to apologize in advance