When I Was...

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HELLO THERE ^^

Another oneshot... LOOL.

I need to stop, but I can't.

So, this shall be a oneshot about you and...

Baekhyun!~

Hope you shall enjoy <3

Edited/Fixed/Touched Up: August/06/14 <3

 

Foreword

"Do you remember?" I felt him holding onto my hand.

"Remember... When I was..."

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Bettina #1
Chapter 1: Saengie! That was good!! I liked it!! :) it was still kind of lacking, though.. SORRY IM GONNA BE HARSH BECAUSE I KNOW YOU CAN DO BETTER!!

Your grammar was lacking and the emotions put was almost there but not enough. I'm usually the type who cries really easily, but I feel this didn't really make me cry.. There are the moments when my chest would constrict but it didn't bring me tears... I'm not asking for 10080 type of tears or Anterograde Tomorrow type of tears! Just, maybe like the years that Luhan and D.O shed in showtime ya know xDD but anyways~ IT WAS GOOD :) good job Lei-ah! :) Eonnie is proud x))
kpopmaniic #2
Meh Likey!!
KisekiYuki #3
Chapter 1: whyyyyyyy!?!?!? why would you write something like that!?!?!? I'm balling my eyes out over here T_______T huhuhu that was so sad and beautiful....I need to go get a box of tissues T____T
KpopLoverSelina #4
Chapter 1: I HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!! THIS IS MAKING ME CRY!!
Hellodur #5
Chapter 1: OMG I HATE YOU RIGHT NOW AUTHOR-NIM :'((((((((((
THIS IS SOOOO SAD!
lia2298 #6
Chapter 1: o my gosh... i'm crying right now!!! i'm so touch with this story... THE STORY IS JUST ASDHJADFHKRYWEK i loved this so much!!! please make more story like this but happy in the end.. ^.^
PrettyandPure #7
Chapter 1: Oh gosh. I love this story. I love you, dear author. This made me want to cry.
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