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▐❀ First Impression (10%) ✥ The first impression is probably the most important thing in the world which shows how good you are at impressing others. So, there is a difference between Enjoyment and First Impression because enjoyment comes from throughout of the whole story and the first impression, oh well, you know what it is.

▐❀ Titles (10%) ✥ This includes the way you've named your Title & Chapters.

▐❀ Posters/Background/Chapter Posters/Trailer (10%)

▐❀ Description/Foreword (10%)✥ 

▐❀   English   (15%) ✥ Your grammars, punctuation and such.

▐❀ Sentence Structures (5%) ✥ Good elaboration?

▐❀ Characters (10%) ✥  

▐❀ Story Plot (20%)✥ Plot is actually originality & flow, which I seriously think that it is the most important part of a story.

▐❀ Creativity/Font (5%) ✥ Your presentation.

▐❀ Ending/Enjoyment/Bonus (5%)✥ How was your ending? Would I vote and subscribe if it's not completed?

▐❀  Extra Comments ✥ 

▐❀ Total (100%) 

 

 

 


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kanqwu
#2
I have requested.
Thank you! ^ ^
HansolLover
#3
requested :)
seaofblue
#4
Chapter 8: Ok… thank you, I will try very hard and take everything into consideration, I will try and fix all the problems. To be honest I had been annoyed with my self for some of these things too, I just wasn't quite sure how to go about it. I really apprecatie your criticism as it wasn't just harsh, but helpful too. Also I was just thinking yeasterday about the plot, and was planing some of my own twists too add in too. Once again, thank you.
i_love_me
#5
I've requested ^.^
seaofblue
#6
I requested for a review!!! Hehe, I can't wait to hear what you hav to say! Thank you very much!!!! ☆〜(ゝ。∂)
Blackjackangel4ever
#7
Chapter 3: i requested a review^^
ThatOneOtherWriter
#8
i've requested a review. thanks in advanced