Hey! New reader here. and i guess it's pretty obvious that I'm also a shipper of N-Young. i plan to write a fanfic about them too but never really had the time to do so.
So glad to know there are a number of fanfics about them here.
I would just like to point out a few things and hopefully, these points could help you improve your story even further.
your plot sounds interesting enough.. the background story is also pretty solid. just try being more descriptive in your writing style though. it may be a bit difficult, but it helps engage the readers more into the story.. and alot some space within the story to build up the characters. ^_^
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