Chapter 5 - Daehyun

The Real YOU

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Sorry I haven't updated for the last few weeks T^T

I have been at school camp & doing piano grade tests T^T

I have finished anyway so I will update as much I can!

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"So... everyone agreed?" Choiee asked

Everyone nodded

"So.. LET'S GO SAINTS!!!!" Songah unni shouted

Yea!!

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--- NEXT DAY ---

I walk up to my school as I yawn with sleepy eyes

I hear a footstep coming from the back

"Hey!! Hi!!" Someone shouts

"Wait... You are...?" I ask

"Hey! you have to remember your own group mates name and face!!" Choiee shouts jokingly

"Choiee!! Sorry I didn't realise since we meet only once yesterday" I say

"Let's go we are late" Choiee says

"Hmmm? What? Aren't you in a different school?" I ask, questioned

"Well... yeah but I heard that you go to this school so I moved!" She said happily

"Thats good then! We get to know each other better!" I say

"What class are you in?" I ask

"I'm in B-127, you?" She answered

"Me too!! Good! that's even better!!" I shouted, holding Choiee's hand

We hold hands and walk to school

NO ONE'S POV

"We have another new kid at our class, Miss Choiee, please come in" Mr.Jung says to the class

Choiee walks in nevous

"Hello... My name is Choiee and I am Dahae's BFF!!" Choiee shouts

Everyone in the class looks at me

"Uhhh... Yeah" Dahae says

Daehyun chuckles and takes a quick look at Dahae's confused face

"You know that I can move if you want" Daehyun whisper's to Dahae

"Nahh... It's fine" Dahae says still not taking her eye's off Choiee

"Sorry Choiee, but the sit next to Dahae is taken by Daehyun" Mr.Jung says as he points to Daehyun

Choiee looks at Daehyun and her eye's almost popped out

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(A/N Daehyun in school uniform)

"But you can sit behind Dahae" Mr. Jung says

"Thank you" Choiee says as she bows and hurried to her desk

"Hi my name is Choiee" Choiee says to Daehyun

"Uhhh... Hi?" Daehyun says awkwardly

"What is with her?" Daehyun quitely asks me

"Nothing~ She is just really bright" I whisper back

Choiee walks to the back and sits on her desk

Dahae turns around and see's Choiee just about to run into Daehyun

'What a weird girl' Dahae thinks

---AFTER SCHOOL---

"Dahae unni~~" Choiee shouts as she jumps on Dahae's back

"Oh Hi" Dahae says

"Are you going home now?" Choiee asked

"No~ I have to go work at the Sushi shop~" I say

"Oh~ Okay~ I'll tell the other unni's that" Choiee says as she waves and walks away

Dahae walks into the sushi shop

"Anyeonghaseyo Ajumma~" I bow and say as I walk in

"Oh anyeong Dahae-ah~" Ajumma says as she smiles

"Now get into the working clothes" She says

Dahae nods and walks into the shop garage and got changed

"I'm ready Ajumma~" Dahae says as she walks out

Dahae looks around then froze

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MsXOXO #1
Chapter 7: Update soon plsss ><
Bishounenirl1
#2
Chapter 7: I like the plot of your story a lot. However, I think that there is a lack of narrative parts and some of the grammar is a little off. I suggest getting a Beta reader or someone who checks your story for grammar mistakes and helps you with organizing the chapter before it's revealed. I also think your character is a little Mary-Sue ish because so far you have only described her as cute, bubbly, and talented. No faults are revealed and there is a lack of conflict. I was honestly trying to give constructive criticism but if I come off as rude to you I'm sorry.
sakura803
#3
Chapter 7: really good story ^^ update soon ^^
Gan-ache
#4
Chapter 6: Love your story! Please update soon! ^^
carinn
#5
Chapter 4: I think Tan Choiee is the prettiest :) oh. And I really your story^^
foxstar_1308 #6
Thank you so much! I have changed the font to arial so it should be better now Thanks for the comment!