W H I T E

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Hi ya'll. This is my first fanfiction here...

I hope you like it, and I would love to see comments to improve my writing skills.

Foreword

There are a lot of new students, this year - Taeyeon thought, as she walked in the hallway of the school, approaching slowly at her classroom.
 
A younger student stopped her, and she handed to the older a small white envelope, which featured pattern with tiny roses.
 
Taeyeon eonni, someone has given to me this, asking for me to bring it to you” - the student said, as she handed the package to Taeyeon.
 
Who has given it to you?
 
“I’m sorry eonni, but this person didn’t want me to tell the name” the girl said .She left Taeyeon even more confused more abaout the letter which she was handing.
 
Then slowly, TaeYeon opened the letter..
 
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Dear Erika…..
 
I think I’m going crazy already
 
I'm not being myself, right now
 
You came into my life, and you ruined it all
 
I don’t mean to be rude by saying this, because, you are ruining it in a special way, what I’m trying to say is….
 
You made me fall for you…
 
You fill the empty side of my heart
 
You made me the happiest person in the world
 
You made my icy heart melt, just by smiling
 
I know you are “his” already, but I can’t help but love you dearly…
I know this is silly, but actually I have admired you, since we have been in the elementary school…
yeah that’s right… You are my first love….
 
My silly first love…
 
My wonderful first love…
 
My pretty first love…
 
My kind-hearted first love
 
My angel first love, and
 
My endless love
 
Cheesy right? Hehehe… sorry, I can’t help it when it comes to you
My friend encouraged me to confess to you, but I want you to know who am I first…
 
Well, here’s the clue…
 
I’m someone who you know....
 
Got the clue?
 
Sincere,
 
Your admirer
 
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"Who could this be….? Someone who I know…?’ - Taeyeon tried to glue together the pieces of the puzzle, obvlivious to be watched by someone... someone who is smiling softly towards her.
 
"I hope you got the clue… Erika…" The person whispered.

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tiemedown #1
<3
exosehunluv1
#2
i realy enjoy the characters!
StarIn #3
Chapter 3: Is it mean she abandoned her own account too?
destiny83
#4
Chapter 3: omo !! I hope Taeng secret admire would be Baekhyun.. lol -slapped-
mars2611
#5
Chapter 2: I'm new reader here ^_^
secretcode #6
For more views... you should add tag.. "snsd" and "taeyeon" separately.
standingstill
#7
I can't wait to read this! ^^