breathe and fall (into place)

Description

The only problem is Luhan forgot to take Chanyeol away from Baekhyun’s memories. 

 

Foreword

Baekhyun thinks he might be a broken puzzle, scattered pieces forced against each other, trying to fit together perfectly even though the edges are rough and crooked.


(Written for The Sky is the Limit || March Madness: Round 1)

THE BEAUTIFUL POSTER IS MADE BY ETERNALLEYLOVE I AM SCREAMING VERY MUCH HOMG
 

Prompt:

I have this strange feeling that I'm not myself anymore. It's hard to put into words, but I guess it's like I was fast asleep, and someone came, disassembled me, and hurriedly put me back together again. That sort of feeling.

- Haruki Murakami, Sputnik Sweetheart

 

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kkaepjjang #1
Chapter 1: It hurts me to read fics like these, where one of them dies. But there's something so beautiful in this fic. I like how Baek is not totally hung up on Chanyeol but he's not letting himself forget either. Chanyeol will always be a huge part of him.
It pains me to think that Chanyeol had this all planned and he was suffering inside.
And Luhan. Luhan Luhan Luhan. I just want to wrap him in a blanket and his hair T_T

I really REALLY liked the part about the mirror puzzle. How the pieces apart are like a broken mirror and Baek is unable to see himself.

Thank you for this fic ^^
wonus
#2
Chapter 1: I usually dont like baekhyun paired with other people haha but in here luhan is such a great man and so kind and idk I like him in here haha but u managed to make me cry with all those chanyeol memories.. Why u make him die tho :'(
menikkey #3
Chapter 1: YOU KNOW I WANT TO READ THIS. LIKE REALLY WANT. idk i suddenly stumbled here.
i want to read this but my heart whispers to me that i'd cry if read this... ugh.

orz
jeonghannah
#4
Chapter 1: GDI, bluu. Why would you do this to me. NOW I WANNA GO TO LUHAN AND HUG HIM AND BE LIKE, "YOU'RE NOT AN INVALID. I LOVE YOU. YOU'RE PERFECT THE WAY YOU ARE."

AND WHAT HAPPENED TO CHANYEOL. WHY DID YOU KILL HIM OFF.
iKitsuNeko
#5
Chapter 1: hdhsus hsbsuss hsssorrkki kforeub!!
This is awesome. I loved how you describes everything. XD The happy feelings I get when they are finally in a better position.
owltowel
#6
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IM STILL SOBBING OVER THIS
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I CANT LIVE LONG IF IM DYING OVER YOUR BAEKLU AND THEN ELEMENTARY FIC.

CAN I JUST.....SIGH.....I.....
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I HAVE NO WORDS

TO EXPRESS


ANYTHING TO DO WITH YOUR WRITING. IM SRS. I ACTUALLY READ THIS EVERY NOW AND THEN. CAUSE BAEKLU IS DISAPPEARING TT_TT AND IM SUPER SAD </3

OHKAI. BYE.

<3
Pokemoninmypants
#7
Ah mah god. I was sobbing .what the hell man. Don't do this to me. Chanyeol will come back. He always comes back . UGH NOOOO.
lastrainhome
#8
Chapter 1: Weeps.
Just- Omfg I can't </3 <3