Chapter 1: Wow, I couldn't stop smiling the whole time I was reading this. I love your writing style and hope you win. FIGHTHING! lol I hope to read more of your stories and you should totally make a sequel.
Chapter 1: I was ^____^, that pretty thing, jajajajjajajaa, so sweet, ejejjejee, "And that sounds as sweet as an cappuccino with chocolate syrup and additional of two teaspoonds of sugar. Too sweet", this world (pretty bad) what we really need is a higher dose of honey and sugar (of course and the dentists would be happy, jejejejje) already. The point, which is a very cute fic, really, we die when YS feels that there is no rain upon him, and awwwwwwww!!!!!!!, we scream is LT!!!!!, is LT!!!!!, that scene is classic, when the character is covered by the other, it's like he implicitly surrender his heart, of course YS accepted it with thousand loves as well (in mex we say: de mi amores = with thousand loves) and he said they do not need words to communicate, because already they´re connected, through love, today I woke ridiculous ajjajajjaaa, but the story is way too cute, and appears a cherry for to crown the cappucino, "a charming dimple on his left cheek appearing. Just one.", thanks to you for so much love .
Beso
Chapter 1: Oh I love this.
I love this oh so much.
I didn't noticed your tags when I read this fic
So I did not expect that It would be Yesung and Leeteuk.
Honestly, When I saw Jongwoon I thought the neighbor would be Ryeowook...for some reason LOL
But it was really well written!
I chose this prompt because I thought that it's interesting that two could fall in love with each other without meeting.
I really thought that it was impossible tbh.
But you made it possible, really interesting!
Anyways, I hope the best for you ;)
Thanks for writing this and joining 天国; Eden Contest ♥
Chapter 1: I always want to read story like this. its in my imagination. everything look so normal especially without . I like how u describe yeye feelings and thought. fall in love with neighbors is something would happen in real life. it so realistic. it would be nice if u make it chaptered. lastly, thanks for writing Yeteuk. they are my top OTP :)
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