BTD

Description

That man swore that he would get his revenge, and Myungsoo wakes to find himself part of it, locked in an abandoned building. Kidnapped from the set of their latest MV, Myungsoo is afraid, confused, and alone…until the maknae shows up. Why here, why now, and what’s going to happen at dawn? 

Foreword

Dry and cracked lips part, hot, dry breath ghosting over them in sharp pants as Myungsoo collapses to the ground of the abandoned building. His head hurts, and all he can remember from the night is the feeling of a hand roughly grabbing his arm and the metallic gleam of the knife that was pressed up against his throat.

Unfolding the paper, he grimaces at each fold, waiting for some message of death.

‘You have until dawn’

Author's Thoughts
taiyou48
Since most of you also sub to SF, I wanted to say I'm going to post the next chapter of it before I post this :)
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niangniang #1
Chapter 1: This was simply asdfghjkl amazing. The suspense, the mystery, the brotherly love...everything was just right. I particularly love the ending - sometimes it's more fun to be able to think of the endless possibilities of the outcome. ;D
shukurimu_daisuki #2
Chapter 1: wow, this is why i love you everytime you make myungjong fic. It's really great. I don't want to force you but I'll really happy if you made a sequel. They can't be dead right...?

okay, bout the story. I love how myungsoo tried to protect Sungjong and hide his fear to calm the younger. It's really hurt to see them suffer throughout the story, not that I'm complain. Maybe because you're too good with words and make it seem real.

about SF, don't be too bothered by it and refrain urself from making new story if you have new idea. It really nice to read any story that you made. I'll wait patiently for SF new chapter..
AznDuckies #3
Chapter 1: This is really good lol I can't wait for the next part . Unless its completed I forgot lol. I love how there's so much Myungjong moments hehe
deliberatemistake #4
Chapter 1: Wow, this is amazing really. At first I was wondering since this is a one-shot, how far you'd go but this was amazing really. A nice theme you have here. As always, it seems vey realistic.
Can't wait for Silent Friendship!
otpenes #5
Chapter 1: Oenni, why did you even say that this won't turn out good? How? Why? This is perfect!

I hate the manager, vindictive! Like, how! It was his fault in the first place. How can he overwork the boys.. and... okay.. I'm done with him!

The suspense! You were able to hold the suspense like suspense! One paragraph after paragraph, I just wanted to know what was about to happen! Like seriously!

I like the fact that you associated this with BTD and like really BTD, it is awesome! And, yes.. this Idea is brilliant! This plot is amazing! I felt like watching a movie! OMG! <3

Oenni, you sure they aren't link romantically? Because I am delusional and they love each other.. xD

They aren't going to die, are they? They can't. As you said, you ended this with an open interpretation.. I interpret it with them surviving.. THEY CAN NOT DIE! NO, THEY CAN NOT!

I am actually so happy with the ending now.. not gonna ask for a sequel(I know you're busy as well :'>), this ended beautifully. <3

This is awesome oenni, all those times you spent getting nervous.. aigooo..
Thank you for sharing this! <3
HWAITING!!
khanhtam #6
aaaaaa, you have a new story?? From description and foreword, I can see it's so interesting and mysterious and have a lot of attractive things. But you still work on the other fic right? You know, the fic I've waited for so so so long >.< Anyway, I want to read this first, so I will wait patiently for this story ^^
shukurimu_daisuki #7
sound enticing.. will it be a oneshot?
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