「PRIVATE SESSIONS」 Consultations for your story writing -*BUSY/CLOSED*-

Description

This is a place where, if you are interested, I will read your story and ask directed and pointed questions that will make you think about what your story is and who your characters are.

And by answering these questions you may be better able to develop an entertaining and worthwhile story to remember!

 

(Or if you are an advanced writer and need another pair of eyes to pull apart your story, then I can do that too.)
 

 

Straight up, this is not a formal review shop. It is not a beta-reading service too. No marks will be given and I won't proof-read your work. Grammar will not be the focus. Your story idea, your plots, your themes, your characters will be the focus.

 

 

COST: Time and patience.

 

 

WARNING: If you do subscribe and have a look at the chapters ... they will contain SPOILERS

We will be talking about specific plots and characters and because of the level of detail and attention within each session we will ruin a story you may want to read for your enjoyment.

So if you want, check out the status list and have a look at the story and know which chapters to skip out on if you want to read someone's wonderful stories. ^^

 

 

 

Foreword

Rules:

  1. Have at least 3 chapters done, unless it is a one/two-shot
  2. I think this is more appropriate for on-going fics but if you are curious for your completed fic then by all means submit it.
  3. There is a password and that signals your agreement about the cost. Password is 'STOP BREAKING PROMISES UNNIE!'
  4. Requests are currently closed. The reviewers are going through the current batch of stories.

 

Request?

  1. Comment with your title and link to the story and the password. If you want to, you may request a specific reviewer.
  2. Your reviewer will reply and will chat to check if there is anything you want to focus on - plot development, flow of story, characters, etc.
  3. Then we will read and think
  4. Then we will ask the questions; along with the notes we made as we were reading and thinking to explain how we came to those questions.
  5. And you will try to answer them (if you want) in your own creative writing ^^

 

 

Other notes:

These are of our own opinions. Respect them because we will respect your story.

You do not have to 'answer' the questions we ask about your story - you are the author of your story and you can decide whether or not they are valid or necessary.

I (ghibliesque) don't ask to be credited or advertised, although you can if you want. The other reviewers in this service may appreciate it though.

 

 

whattodoaboutonew
Reviewers have selected their stories. Some stories will have more than one reviewer - that means they will get more than one review. (A bonus for you)

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exoticbabylove
#1
Chapter 23: Oh my gosh, I am so sorry for not changing the shop's updates! Thank you so much for the critical review; it did make me open my eyes after reading your detailed review as I didn't think too much a few months ago when I wrote this. However, when I start re-reading the story now. It did make me feel that there are indeed places that have gone wrong or the realistic rate wasn't there.
Thank you for the advice! I will try harder in my characterization and do the necessary changes.
Thanks once again!:)
jayart95
#2
I think I forgot to comment ;; but yes I still want my review ((too late?;;)
seouljaboy #3
Chapter 21: ?????? don't you mean 30 october 2013??
exoticbabylove
#4
Chapter 2: Hi, I have this fanfic. I just feel very 'disgusted' with it. The cause of this emotion/feeling might be due to the major hiatus I took due to the National Exams. They ended last month and I returned.
It might be due to the stress I had during the exam period, I don't have that inspiration to carry on for my story. I don't even feel like going to that link of the story. I feel that my writing suddenly became extremely amateurish.
My co-author told me that I have 'holes' in my story (you know what I mean) and I need to 'patch' them up, but how? It's seriously so hard to solve everything myself when I just started writing half a year ago. I don't know anything and how am I suppose to solve this question myself?

I love writing initially, until now updating feels like a work/burden when every reader would call me to update soon and stuff like that. I wish to talk to someone to share my thoughts(perferably a writer/consultant so that you might have experienced these scenarios). I would like to elaborate in a more specifical way. I hope you would help me.

My Dead Fangirl: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/502543/my-dead-fangirl-supernatural-sehun-sumin

Staff: ghibliesque

Password: STOP BREAKING PROMISES UNNIE!

I would wait for your reply and hope you would solve things out for me.
paradisease
#5
Chapter 2: Uhh, hai. I have this fanfic, and I haven't updated it, because I'm not really sure of what would happen next. I haven't lost motivation, but my inspiration and creative juices are almost running out. TT And I want to find out if my writing style can be changed into something more...interesting, I guess?

Amber Eyes: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/476583
Reviewer: jamdii
PW: STOP BREAKING PROMISES UNNIE!

Thank you so much. T^T
Nictaeny9
#6
Chapter 21: Would totally still love to have my review! :)
SweetCandyXXX
#7
Chapter 10: Uh, Hello. I've never been to a review shop so I'm kind of nervous for some reason :P And I found that your reviews seems reliable and helpful ^^ So I was hope that you could help me out and see where I could get help.

May major problem is that it feels like it's dragging on yet sometimes I feel like I'm rushing it. Help please~

Broken In Love: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/566787

PW: STOP BREAKING PROMISES UNNIE!
ErisChaotica
#8
Chapter 20: Even though it's now kind of an old story and I've finally gotten a review on it, I'd still like you to review Warflower. Thank you oodles for putting all of the time and effort that you do into reviewing. Good luck with completing your degree. ^^
-Yoshi
#9
Chapter 20: I'm also busy with university and whatnot, but I'd still like to hear your opinion on my story. So yes please, to the review ^^ Good luck with everything, and I wish you the best with your degree :)
Nictaeny9
#10
Hi! Do you think you can take a look at my first fanfic? Just need some comments.
Dark Ties:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/543164/dark-ties-dark-romance-snsd-taeny-taeyeon-tiffany-yuri
STOP BREAKING PROMISES UNNIE!