Chapter 1: Just read this ^^ It was good, short and to the point! You might want to check the "was" and the "were", they were used wrongly in some sentences! Other than that, I liked it as it was really to the point! :>

Chapter 1: awww~~~ this is too sweet! short and simple :)
nicely done~ reminds me of a friend of mine...
anyway, thumbs up author nim ;)