Unaffected.

Description

Daehyun is someone that can't feel anything. No emotions at all.

Foreword

You must think my life is boring, but I'm not lonely. There are some people that think of me as a friend. I don't know why, but they're decided to make me feel something. Wasted. 

 

 

 

Once again, I only own the idea for the story.

If you saw some mistakes or if you want to comment, feel free :)

Enjoy!

~Mila.

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BxRandom #1
Chapter 1: Why...... Why....... Why....... WHY ? Ugh gimme le fluff !!!
ManonHF #2
Chapter 1: Ok. It's really different than the other one even if there is a "patient" again, and differences, and other same points than the other one. I'm very curious about what is the thing I inspire you to write this story, really really curious about it!

Concerning the critic:
I think what I like in your style of writting is the way you describe the characters, I have no difficulties to imaginate your characters, their personnalities, their ways of living even if we have just certain moments of their lifes and it's a really good point for you. I mean... I wanted to tell you this yesterday and I forgot after... It's not really difficult to me to imaginate characters in story but when they come as easy in my mind, it's like magical and I like it.
I liked the story too, it's more described than the one of yesterday and you don't lose meaning with this, so it's fantastic, don't you think? It's a very good idea you had and you had utilized it very well.
Again, I'm so jealous with your flow in english........... #jealous #jealous #jealous.
I think I haven't critics to formule, and it's a little disappointing, I love criticing.....
So good job! I liked it! Really!
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