Forever

Description

We said that it would be forever.

But since when did forever end?

Foreword

An angsty one-shot reflecting on the sad way most relationships end.

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folaau04 #1
Chapter 1: sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel
Park_HyeSun #2
Chapter 1: Ah, this is rather interesting since it is simple short and sweet in a sense. I mean, you probably get what I mean.

Can I come up with a suggestion though? I don't mean to find faults, but your first sentence sounds a little odd.

The sentence (We said it would be for forever.) seems to sound better - in my opinion, you don't need to take it seriously if you don't want to - if it is rephrased as (We said it would last forever.) or (We promised to define forever.).

OTL, anyways aside from my suggestion, this was a decent read. ^^/ Have a nice day!
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