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1 step 2 step 3 step inhale .. 1 step 2 step 3 step exhale .. 'Aron-ah. Let's go home neh?' The little boy slowly open his eye and smile sweetly to his hyung and reach out both of his hand to his hyung asking to be carried home.

Foreword

Hello ... This is ummm my first story but I will try my best to write a good story .. (:
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Ryuurain #1
Chapter 6: Actually you got a good plot but one second this person is talking the other is this other one. All is pushed together in this one short paragraph so my eyes were going everywhere. Clear your head and put idea after the other idea. I'll take this as a rough draft keep writting. I want to developed between the couples.In my believe, I think you got too much in your brain for your hands to register. Hehehe just take it chill and think everything over right down everything and then go over it and fix it. Arasso?Arasso. HWAITING!
Ryuurain #2
Chapter 2: Oh that's cold you made U-Know Yunho into some beating dude. Hmmm I'll read >,>
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