Meet exo m

Once in a lifetime

Before I start the story there are things that are different like they're not 23 or 22 or 21, in my story there 16 all of them are,I know that it's different I'm sorry but these ideas just pop out of my mind, so if you see me right something not right about them please don't hate anything because its JUST A STORY so please don't hate I'm not trying to get a lot of subs I just really like writing,so sorry for wasting your time on this, but here goes the story, by the way if you like BAP I might just write a fanfic on them and please comment your name if you want to be a character,

 

luhan's POV

 

so here goes, a new manager, a new stage, a new everything, the good thing is they didn't replace any of exo,

So here's the cast!

Kris- my best friend, age 16, the role: the flirt

Xiumin- the quiet nerdy one

Lay- the nice little puppy ( he's not really a puppy )

Chen- the loud kiddyish one

Tao- the other loud one but this time the other loud retarted one and idiotic

Luhan- that's me, they call me the caring Prince Charming,

 

the story,

" alright exo!!!" Our new manager said before he was interrupted by Tao 

" it's exom " Tao explained, and the manager looked at him with such a frightful look, that Tao didnt make any noise, he didnt even breathe, I covered Tao mouth with my hand and the manager turned his head to face me,I gulped so loud you could hear it from across the room,

" thank you kris!" The manager said to me, i heard exo have little chuckles even Kris!

" but I'm luhan," I corrected, I felt nervous since I didn't know what he was gonna say, after all he is a NEW manager

" alright, thank you Luzon " he said now I really wanted correct him, so I finally got the courage to do it , now exo was smirking and grinning trying to stop/ hide their laughs

" LuHAn!!!" I said now feeling a little bit more annoyed,he stared at me with those fiery brown eyes, I swear I could feel it piercing through my brain, even though I'm not as smart as Xiumin I knew that looked meant for me to shut the " fridge " up

"Luzon is fine! Luzon is a .....great name!!" ( by the way Luzon is a place in Philippines!) I said stuttering, I was now shaking and I was about to leak, until he turned his attention to the others, phew! He started talking, oh I meant shouting

" alright you retards!! You haven't a come back in like what ...75 years?!?, so in 3 weeks we will make a huge comeback!, alright not the little ones you used to have, a girl named rebbeca berchowits bought the front row tickets for half a million dollars, so you see how important this show is?!? We'll have to practise 24-7!!!! By the way we need a pianist, if you can't find one I'm getting one of you to wash my car for a year!!" And after he finished he gave us one more threatening look and off he went,

" what kind of a manager was that???" I asked while taking my hands of Tao's mouth but before I did I felt a wet slimy thing touch it" your hand tastes good!!" Tao said while it, I quickly wiped it off on kris's leather jacket,but he didn't care he was too busy texting his new " friend"

" he was awful! I'd like to do some  defenestration on him!! ( throw him out a window) you could hear fremesene from everywhere when he talks to you!( grumbling)  I horripilated when he was there ( got goosebumps) !!" Xiumin said in some sort of language

"  we no speak you big smart talk!" Tao said while shaking his head ( yes that did come from suite life on deck)

"English Xiumin! English!" Kris said finally putting his phone down,

" he's not that bad! He called us pop tarts!! That's good!" Chen said with a huge grin on his face

" he said retard idiot!" Kris said trying to make a stupid face at him

" YOU'RE SO MEAN TO ME!!!!!" Chen whined ( yes that came from victorious)

" focus guys!, we gotta get a pianist" I said snapping them back to reality, I decided we should go with a tweet, it read " auditions for pianist!! S.M. Plaza 8:00 - 6:00" and send,

 

 

 

 

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Avatarjasmin #1
Chapter 2: The idea seems pretty interesting, but you should work on your grammar! Also, if you're writing on Microsoft Word, they have grammar and spell check ^^ AFF has a spell check as well :)
summerswirlies
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I like the title of your story but I didn't understand the plot!