The Ridiculed

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The dorm is dark and empty, but that didn’t seem to be a problem for him before. Until now – now that his band mates are out and Jonghyun can literally feel how it is to be alone. He hates it. He hates that he’s hurting because—

Am I that ugly?

 

 

Foreword

Note:
I had to. This is my own take on Key's confession-slash-rhetoric on SHINee's Wonderful Day: Am I that ugly?
I'm a huge Locket and Kim Kibum will never know how deep he had scarred me by simply doubting his perfection.
I just had to let this out in a small drabble or I'll go mad, seriously.

 

 

 

 

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Bumslilfreak #1
Chapter 1: This is like... idk, I lost count of how many times I've read this, and every single time I cry. Seriously, to me, Kibum is the definition of perfection. Sometimes, I even think the word "perfection" is not enough to describe him... not only he is beautiful, gorgeous, handsome - just breathtaking - but he's also funny, intelligent, strong, and really talented. I could go on and on talking about him.

I think you did an amazing job here. You made me cry and I can't believe Kibum thinks he's ugly. He always puts the rest of the members first than him and I don't like it. I do agree the rest of them are handsome and all but... To me, Kibum will always be number 1 for everything. I've heard some people say awful things about him and it pisses me off so much! People just don't know how to appreciate what's truly worth it. Ugh, seriously, I better stop here or I'd never finish...

Amazing job, really, LOVED IT!♡
QueenEel #2
Chapter 1: Kibuuuuuuuuum :(
You're sosososososo beautiful,,
This is really good btw :)
starthatsshinee #3
Chapter 1: Sigh. Sigh. Sigh. Sigh. Sigh.. Err, Crishii. You hopeless romantic osom writer, I hate you. Hahaha. Kidding. I love you. ♥_♥ I just logged in and now my mind is full of Jongkey again. -_-
shineeshipper #4
Chapter 1: Key/Kibum is just freaking gorgeous! He is amazing and sometimes I do feel that he is underrated in a lot of things. I was very happy that he got that one solo dance part in Beautiful because people do in fact need to see that he is an amazing dancer (apart from the girl dances). This little drabble was amazing. I was listening to Can't Leave while reading this and well I was just...overflowing with emotions... Key's singing in Can't Leave was so amazing too...
MissLocket #5
Chapter 1: Just so you know... I am crying right now. You put on words just what I have been feeling about Key lately, even I had asked myself the same questions that Jonghyun had on your story. To be honest, I am so worried for Key. Keep mean comments away from your mind and heart is pretty hard and tiring, so I guess that he is kind of affected by that words. His answers make me saddest. So, I really hope Jonghyun or his other friends make him see how amazing he truly is. Shinee is my favorite boyband, but Key is my ultimate bias. In fact, he is the only artist that I follow like a real fan, I admire and respect him. I wish everyone could think like me.
kkbeasty #6
Chapter 1: Oh god ... Beautiful Story .. But ... I hated This scene so much!!! I just want to punch the people in the face who say that key, THE almighty key, is ugly!!! I WANT TO PUNCH THEM IN THE FACE SO BADLY!! Well .. I did .. To my friends who said that >: I hate the fact that he even THINKS about being ugly .. I mean .. He's perfect ;A;

Ok .. Back to the Story .. Really Awesome~~ Loved it <3
musikey #7
Chapter 1: D:< yeah right, seems like he is greatly underrating himself ! I mean, HE IS A ____ING PIECE OF PERFECTION. But he never says he consider himself good-looking or anything. COME KIBUM YOU'RE THE MOST ATTRACTIVE ____ER I'VE EVER SEEN IN MY LIFE ! Just look at his perfect pouty lips, jaw line, cat eyes, dimples, and everything else and i'm not even talking of expressions or style (or ). OTL
is the japanese classment thing true ?
Otherwise, your story was cute ! :D
Took me some time to understand the beginning, though. I thought Kibum had let a suicide video or something like that...(it' not your fault, i'm just kind of slow) OTL i glad it wasn't. I'm not in the mood for heavy angst. Actually, i'm never in the mood for heavy angst.
almightyYimmie #8
Chapter 1: Key is my ideal human being! (sorry for the weird way of phrasing it, but it's true~)

He is beautiful, confident, cute, manly, social and in every way perfect.... Even his little flaws are perfect in my eyes. He is dorky which is just precious. He can be insecure, but it shows that he is only human which I like. His laugh can be obnoxious as it can get, but it is contagious. Seriousness. A trait everyone needs. An umma... This is just one thing I love about him. His character isn't perfect, but still it is. I like to see the beauty in everything and his beauty is just so bright.

Aye... If someone would listen to me right now, one would think I am in love... Which I am not. I am a fan, an admirer and just a human who is grateful for having come to know Kibum through kpop. Thatnks to Key... I became more confident, a happier and optimistic person. And for that I am grateful.

Therefore, I don't understand people who say that Kibum is ugly which he is not. That man/boy is perfectness with perfect flaws. *totally biased for life*

I'm proud to be a Locket <3
Yo_Chin #9
Chapter 1: Ugh. You are wonderful, you know that? Thank you. Fellow Locket here as well.
Meakapike #10
Chapter 1: This small story was really, really amazing. I like how you wrote both Jonghyun and Key. I wish I could say better how much I love this story. It is funny too since I have always thought that Key is sooo hot and he is my favourite in Shinee
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