Chapter 1: I love the tension when jiyong was in the store and they shared those intensely private moments with one another, while all the other store employees watched on with no clue to their actions.
And then how you made the call back to when they first came across each other in the afternoon at the bus stop when Seunghyun stepped out of the store after his shift and Ji's car pulled up.
The sticky, sweaty press of summer heat through the whole fic was such a present feel from beginning to end. I loved that element of it. Especially because its early morning over here and it's a cold, rainy day. I'm catching the very packed morning bus into the city and it was interesting to place myself in this world, in the sticky heat instead of this chilly morning.
My most favourite elements that stood out to me were Ji's pink hair all soft and fluffy, how his scent constantly invaded his senses and that bead of sweat on Hyun's cuspids bow. And I adored how sweet and shy Jiyong turned out to be when he put himself out there. And hyunnie caught him ^^
This was seriously amazing. I loved every little bit of it <3
Chapter 1: wait so seunghyun meets a snobby kwon jiyong first, then meets him again on the bus?? >.< I'm kinda confused, but its probably because I'm unbearably slow and dense XD so don't mind me!
I loved this, by the ways!! I find seunghyun's sweating really cute, and I like how you kind of kept the story connected to sweat XD thank you~~
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