Walking alone

Description

While taking a walk alone on the beach Hyukjae has a rather unpleasant meeting with some college boys

Foreword

 

title: Walking alone

lenght: oneshot

characters: donghae, hyukjae, hukjaes parents, some of Domghaes soccer team

pairings: haehyuk

'warning': non consensual kissing and touching, a not so nice Donghae, bad comma placement

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Lad7whisper
#1
Chapter 1: What really hit me about this story is the mention of the gut speaking loudly, and how foolishly we often ignore it. It is a matter of fact.
Donghae was a real to impose himself like this. The sadder thing is that out there people like this exist. People that think they can impose themselves on others, they can do whatever they want and get away with it.
Hopefully Hyukjae will never bump into him again, or perhaps, they will years later and Donghae might recognize what a crappy behavior he had.
ReadRealize #2
Chapter 1: Oh hae that’s mean
sugar_snow
#3
Chapter 1: ohh this is so interesting. Donghae has disgusting behavior and I hope he rot in hell for his action. Poor Hyukjae. I hope he will be fine.
Xjyuna #4
Chapter 1: Ok this is well written and really as usual good story but it’s not good donghae acted that way?? Almost like ar and poor hyukjae for two days he locked himself . Afraid . Confused . I don’t know why everyone wrote “ lovely “and “ love it “ !! I mean how can donghae’s act be lovely? I’m not accusing you author .. it’s just the comments that irrtates me saying this was good . Your story is good but not donghae’s actions !
ddohaedalnim
#5
Chapter 1: oh, god now i want to smack donghae's head sooo bad, poor my baby hyuk (●´з`)♡ i really hope there will be a closure for both of them, pleaseeeee???
NikaTheNeko
#6
Chapter 1: Sequeeeeel pleeeeaseeeee!!!!
FWSJ15 #7
Chapter 1: Just found this story and I love it... please make at least an epilogue or a sequel would be even better please...^^
jewElf_13
#8
Chapter 1: Read this again...sequel maybe? Hihi
Mystic_Di #9
Chapter 1: Poor Hyuk. He'll never forget that :( But I like the plot and hope that you'll make a sequel :) Thanks for sharing ^_^
KaedieNoonaWrites
#10
Chapter 1: OMFG I NEED A ING EPILOGUE OR SEQUEL XD