Chapter 11: Did you give up on the story?

Chapter 11: I totally understand your decision. I'm glad you're updating again. Good luck!

Chapter 11: i shouldn't haev read this i'm not staff and now i'm crying

Chapter 11: yay i'm happy that you'll be working on this story!
and i totally respect and understand your decision,
it's your character so it's entirely up to you.
can't wait for the update ♡

Chapter 10: Just voted, i'm here to support you author-nim. :)

Chapter 6: omf yes. something to get me through the school year.
chapters where you have to introduce characters are always
a feat that is a bit hard to nail down. but hey!, like you said
it's convenient and ya'll just got it out of the way so hakuna matata gurl B)
(it's also good since it's from gyuri's perspective, which i like)

idek why I laughed when ryn called kris beanstalk. maybe cuz it's cute and i'm totally imaging kris as jack in jack and the beanstalk. (but wouldn't he be the giant since he's tall and wow i'm going totally off-topic MIAN)

i'm luvin how you're portraying taeyeon bcuz i totally wouldn't mind her being my manager for anything. but I can't with kai, you really wanna be a koala? what a special snowflake u are -clap clap- the dumb duo is a perfect term for those two dorks \o/

anticipating the next chap for obv reasons! c:

Chapter 6: Haha I don't find this chapter boring at all! It's interesting to read the characters' introduction, though it gets a bit overwhelming with so many characters at once, but i guess there's nothing we can do abt that. There are still other characters (the rest of teh boys) that we haven't meet yet so i'm really looking forward to that too. Kai and sehun crack me up so much lol these two... and their low-five made me facepalm lol

i think I really like gyuri and xingxing too. I love the way you depict Yanghee so take all these hearts <3<3<3<3<3. Ryn sounds spoilt sometimes :p I think it's because Kris is there with her haha but don't worry, she keeps me interested with teh story

I enjoyed this chapter so thank you! Take your time with the next chapter and fighting!

Chapter 6: i was just thinking about this story since i was at california adventure on sunday ; u ;
i'm loving all the characters already and xingxing is kind of my fav rn her clothes doe <3
and i knew once you mentioned the snack table that that's where hyunja would be aha
+omg jongin and sehun, you awkward weirdos
((fun fact: koalas are basically high all the time))
i actually quite liked this chapter and can't wait for the next one! c:

Chapter 6: TAEYEON
that shirt. i like that shirt. i want to be friends with whoever is wearing that shirt.
i used to know the words to the hsm songs but only the choreo to we're all in this together because that's the only one i found a tutorial video for. uh.
jongin wants to be a koala omfg
does that mean he wants to sleep 20 hours a day and only eat semipoisonous leaves because /judging so hard rn
(more writing related: it's a little difficult for me to get drawn into the story because every sentence is so long and filled with detail. it's great in terms of "show don't tell", but really boring in terms of writing flow and sentence structure. also, maybe cut down on the adjectives a little bit? some feel extraneous. there's also very small tense issues - asides and thoughts/names should still be in past, even if they continue on to the present.)
(for a really stupid little typo:
...the opposite a she was told the time.)

Chapter 2: wow im so happy thati got chosen! I havent been too active on aff these days but il be on the lookout for this fic. kris seemed like a cool guy B) I dont have much to say abt the teaser but im excited to see how the story unfolds when they start working. good job so far! fighting!

also, thank you so much for choosing my app^^