title: 4/5

The title is good but I wonder who does the word 'OUR' represent,

Zelo and her or Yongguk and her?

foreword : 9/10

The foreword and description is good, I like it.

It contains a little bit of spoil but I like the scene you describe.

appearance: 9/10

Very beautiful,from the font you use,the poster and background.

(ZELO! He's on background,but it looks nice!)

I love everything,minus one point from the main picture of chapters.

Those quotes and pictures are beautiful,

but I don't like the colour, it doesn't match.

plot : 8/10

I like the plot;sad but sweet at the same time.

It's nice but it's something that you can easily find in dramas or fanfics.

writing style : 15/15

You write it very well; I can find only a few mistakes in the story but that's okay.

I like the way you write it a lot :D

flowing : 14.5/15

The story went well until the last chapter; it ends too fast.

realistic : 6.5/10

Well,it's absolutely unrealistic; both guys are too perfect,

I mean,they're too good to be real human.

I wonder why Zelo's family doesn't contact the girl after he was back.

Many things don't makes sense.

ending : 9/10

As I said, it ends too fast and easy.

It was sweet but it's just that everything went too fast.

enjoyment : 15/15

I love the feeling of this story and your writing style.

Even though the personality doesn't match the characters at all.

Zelo isn't my bias but I love reading story about him.lol

total : 90 /100

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My favorite type of fanfics.

I love this story :D

Nice story and feelings.♥