title: 5/5

I love the name;it fits the story and sounds really beautiful.

(remind me of Naul's 'Memory of the Wind')

foreword : 10/10

The foreword and description is perfect.

I really want to read the story when I read the foreword.

appearance: 8/10

It's really beautiful;both the poster and background.

You make it nice;minus from the poster width,it's not really HQ.

The layout could still look better but that's okay,this is easy to read and I like the font.

plot : 10/10

The plot isn't unique but it's beautiful as it is.

Nothing cofusing,simple but not boring.

writing style : 14/15

I like it,3rd person POV. You describe it really nice.

I can cleary understand both Myungsoo and Jiyeon's feeling.

Minus one point;you put comma instead of period in some talking lines.

flowing : 14/15

The story went well;except that the flashback.

It's nice with that way but you should seperate it a bit.

realistic : 8/10

Seriously, fall of the cliff? Well the accident could happen.

But it's just that Jaejoong who is overacted.

A little bit curious why their family suddenly accepted their relationship.

ending : 10/10

It makes me feel warm after reading this.

I can feel the feelings between them;sad yet beautiful.

No need to have a clear ending but just nice as the way it is.

enjoyment : 15/15

I enjoy reading this. I love the pairing.

Jiyeon is always the best actress for drama things.

Well,I'm not happy with T-ara incident.LOL

But that's not the matter. I love this story ;D

total : 94 /100

     ( Shinigami ) -

this is very beautiful. I love this story

Thanks for being the first one for the review.

Good job! Keep writing more beautiful story.