Katakatica- The story of a broken Dragon

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Story: The strory of a broken Dragon

Reviwed by: LuhansperfAngel - angst fantasy fluff gtop romance supernatural - main story image

Title: 5/5

Good job,it's original ^^

 

Characters: 4/5

Honestly,i skipped because it was too long ;u;

 

Foreword and Description: 4/5

I got a little bit confused but good job anyways ^^

 

Originality: 8/10

You know...i was so damn close to give you full marks but all these mates stuff and demon or whatever is easy to find nowdays but i love it.

 

Grammar: 15/15

Well done.

 

Writting style: 18/20

Ah my eyes ;u; the dialog just ahh.

tips* write the person's reply or whenever they want to talk in a new para.

exp* "what are you doing hyung?" Sehun asked as Kai walk back and forth.

"Aish that women is driving me crazy!" Kay groaned and ran his fingers through his messy hair.

 

Flow: 10/10

HoHo,I'm so nice ^^

 

Overall enjoyement: 19/20

 

Bonus: 5/5

 

Overall grade: 97/100

 

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ilabya4 #1
interesting~
proudappler #2
Hi! Can we be affies? http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/426373/hello-kitty-graphic-review-shop-open-for-requests-graphics-request-hellokitty-reviewingshop-graphicreviews-openforrequests-openforreviews
baeklightful #3
Hello there!
Will your review shop be open any time soon? :o
Kpopxoxo #4
Hi! I will like to request! But I was wondering if I comment the information of if I send it to you over message. Please let me know and thank you! ;)
trixyBee #5
⇨AFF username: trixyByuri
⇨ AFF profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/242449
⇨ Story title and link: Every Single Step || http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/369665/
⇨ Poster link : N/A
⇨ One-shot, complete or not-completed?: completed one-shot
⇒ Reviewer: GorjessSeomate
⇨ Password: PastelFlowers
Katakatica #6
Chapter 21: Thank you for the review. That is a pretty old oneshot O was just curious what my style was like back then. I like to think that I've improved since then, you know. My English was pretty bad back then I guess (it's not my first language) and I needed to get the grip on it. I use " instead of ' ,now but my keyboard was Hungarian back then and it would always go to the bottom of the words cF I'll be ccrediting once I get home.
dexterous #7
Chapter 20: thank you so much for the review! c:
i'll work on it based on your suggestions.
thank you again! :3

btw, i used to be sehunf_.
i just changed my username lol.
PastelClover #8
Chapter 19: Thanks for the review ^^ It helps me a lot ^^
Katakatica #9
I'm asking for two in a row if that's okay, one cause I wanna be a Flower, two, cause I won't be home tonight xD These are both oneshots and a bit older, so yeah xD

⇨AFF username: Katakatica
⇨ AFF profile link:https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/173075
⇨ Story title and link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/322750/his-rainbow-tears-angst-fluff-jonghyun-jongkey-key-romance-shinee - His Rainbow Tears
⇨ Poster link : I don't have one, I usually don't ask for posters for oneshots xD
⇨ One-shot, complete or not-completed?: Oneshot
⇒ Reviewer: anyone ^^
⇨ Password: Pastelflowers




⇨AFF username: Katakatica
⇨ AFF profile link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/173075
⇨ Story title and link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/283668/i-don-t-want-to-let-you-go-angst-jongkey-romance-sad-shinee-tragedy - I don't want to let you go (the title was like this on purpose xD)
⇨ Poster link : none
⇨ One-shot, complete or not-completed?: oneshot
⇒ Reviewer: anyone
⇨ Password:Pastelflowers
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