PastelClover- A Life For My Boyfriend

A Life for My Boyfriend - PastelClover

Title: 5/5

Never heard that kind of title before. It's really unique ^^

Characters: 5/5

The characters were well put together. HunHan, eh? ;)

Description and foreward: 5/5

They were well put toward the story, especially using quotes.

Originality: 15/15

Never read a story like this one before.

Grammar: 15/15

Very good grammar!

Writing style: 20/20

Your detail was what caught me a majority of the time.

Flow: 10/10

The flow was really good.

Overall enjoyment: 18/20

Bonus: 5/5

Total score: 98/100

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ilabya4 #1 Mar 27, 2014 14:30:46

interesting~

proudappler #2 Apr 13, 2013 14:32:26

Hi! Can we be affies? http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/426373/hello-kitty-graphic-review-shop-open-for-requests-graphics-request-hellokitty-reviewingshop-graphicreviews-openforrequests-openforreviews

baeklightful #3 Apr 1, 2013 07:47:38

Hello there!
Will your review shop be open any time soon? :o

Kpopxoxo #4 Feb 19, 2013 17:39:25

Hi! I will like to request! But I was wondering if I comment the information of if I send it to you over message. Please let me know and thank you! ;)

trixyBee #5 Feb 16, 2013 04:54:10

⇨AFF username: trixyByuri
⇨ AFF profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/242449
⇨ Story title and link: Every Single Step || http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/369665/
⇨ Poster link : N/A
⇨ One-shot, complete or not-completed?: completed one-shot
⇒ Reviewer: GorjessSeomate
⇨ Password: PastelFlowers

Katakatica #6 Feb 12, 2013 00:06:50

Chapter 21: Thank you for the review. That is a pretty old oneshot O was just curious what my style was like back then. I like to think that I've improved since then, you know. My English was pretty bad back then I guess (it's not my first language) and I needed to get the grip on it. I use " instead of ' ,now but my keyboard was Hungarian back then and it would always go to the bottom of the words cF I'll be ccrediting once I get home.

dexterous #7 Feb 11, 2013 06:00:41

Chapter 20: thank you so much for the review! c:
i'll work on it based on your suggestions.
thank you again! :3

btw, i used to be sehunf_.
i just changed my username lol.

PastelClover #8 Feb 10, 2013 09:07:00

Chapter 19: Thanks for the review ^^ It helps me a lot ^^

Katakatica #9 Feb 9, 2013 07:20:37

I'm asking for two in a row if that's okay, one cause I wanna be a Flower, two, cause I won't be home tonight xD These are both oneshots and a bit older, so yeah xD

⇨AFF username: Katakatica
⇨ AFF profile link:https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/173075
⇨ Story title and link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/322750/his-rainbow-tears-angst-fluff-jonghyun-jongkey-key-romance-shinee - His Rainbow Tears
⇨ Poster link : I don't have one, I usually don't ask for posters for oneshots xD
⇨ One-shot, complete or not-completed?: Oneshot
⇒ Reviewer: anyone ^^
⇨ Password: Pastelflowers

⇨AFF username: Katakatica
⇨ AFF profile link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/173075
⇨ Story title and link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/283668/i-don-t-want-to-let-you-go-angst-jongkey-romance-sad-shinee-tragedy - I don't want to let you go (the title was like this on purpose xD)
⇨ Poster link : none
⇨ One-shot, complete or not-completed?: oneshot
⇒ Reviewer: anyone
⇨ Password:Pastelflowers