BaiLingLing - With Death

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☆ Title: 5/5
The title looks interesting.
 
☆ Characters: 5/5
I love the characters ! Meow~
 
☆ Description/ Foreword: 4/5
 
☆ Originality: 14/15
Wow. So many death. I like it ! <3
 
☆ Grammar: 15/15
Better than mine. *O*
 
☆ Writing style: 18/20
Good but.. the font size.. It's become smaller.. resize it to 14 ^_^
 
☆ Flow: 9/10
 
☆ Overall enjoyment: 19/20
 
☆Bonus: 5/5
 
☆ Overall grade: 94/100
 
 
Reviewer: BYG_BAP
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ilabya4 #1
interesting~
baeklightful
#3
Hello there!
Will your review shop be open any time soon? :o
Kpopxoxo
#4
Hi! I will like to request! But I was wondering if I comment the information of if I send it to you over message. Please let me know and thank you! ;)
trixyBee
#5
⇨AFF username: trixyByuri
⇨ AFF profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/242449
⇨ Story title and link: Every Single Step || http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/369665/
⇨ Poster link : N/A
⇨ One-shot, complete or not-completed?: completed one-shot
⇒ Reviewer: GorjessSeomate
⇨ Password: PastelFlowers
Katakatica
#6
Chapter 21: Thank you for the review. That is a pretty old oneshot O was just curious what my style was like back then. I like to think that I've improved since then, you know. My English was pretty bad back then I guess (it's not my first language) and I needed to get the grip on it. I use " instead of ' ,now but my keyboard was Hungarian back then and it would always go to the bottom of the words cF I'll be ccrediting once I get home.
dexterous
#7
Chapter 20: thank you so much for the review! c:
i'll work on it based on your suggestions.
thank you again! :3

btw, i used to be sehunf_.
i just changed my username lol.
PastelClover
#8
Chapter 19: Thanks for the review ^^ It helps me a lot ^^
Katakatica
#9
I'm asking for two in a row if that's okay, one cause I wanna be a Flower, two, cause I won't be home tonight xD These are both oneshots and a bit older, so yeah xD

⇨AFF username: Katakatica
⇨ AFF profile link:https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/173075
⇨ Story title and link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/322750/his-rainbow-tears-angst-fluff-jonghyun-jongkey-key-romance-shinee - His Rainbow Tears
⇨ Poster link : I don't have one, I usually don't ask for posters for oneshots xD
⇨ One-shot, complete or not-completed?: Oneshot
⇒ Reviewer: anyone ^^
⇨ Password: Pastelflowers




⇨AFF username: Katakatica
⇨ AFF profile link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/173075
⇨ Story title and link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/283668/i-don-t-want-to-let-you-go-angst-jongkey-romance-sad-shinee-tragedy - I don't want to let you go (the title was like this on purpose xD)
⇨ Poster link : none
⇨ One-shot, complete or not-completed?: oneshot
⇒ Reviewer: anyone
⇨ Password:Pastelflowers