Soul Mate

Catching Cars

 

One year after our earthly repose, Father, Dabin and I are still newcomers, discovering something strange with every passing of each day. Not one of these goes by without wonder at where the other non-survivor is. Doubtless, that person is in one of those other “rooms” Afterlife is rumoured to have. Why she never ended up with us intrigues and slightly disturbs me. Was she a better person? Did she ever do anything for her to end up in a lesser plane?

I walk through one of the many roads twisting like knots of yarn in a basket, head down, knowing that the forces in this dimension will take me back home when I am needed. As I look up, the sight of a feminine figure with a sheet of blue-green covering her head gives me hope at an answer to my questions. She turns her head, her back unmoving, and her eyes offer a slight glint of recognition. A car stops, its owner briefly answering a call on his phone; the girl enters his car, fluidly moving through painted metal, and I understand. I follow, sitting next to her, eager with questions.

Something stumps me. It could be her hair, her silence, her overly welcoming looks; or it could be the air of melancholy blanketing her presence.

The car moves, and we stay still, watching the scenery pass swiftly as humans do in life. It is not an uncomfortable silence, and I am contented. Enchanted. I wonder why we met today, of all days. A glance at the car owner’s phone reveals the date, warming the ice that envelops the living world around us.

 

Christmas Day.

 

 

And two words cross my mind.

 

 

 

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kisoap
#1
Chapter 1: "One year after our earthly repose, Father, Dabin and I are still newcomers, discovering something strange with every passing of each day... Did she ever do anything for her to end up in a lesser plane?"

Possibly the best opening I've ever read on this site. So much is told in this one paragraph and...I don't know. It's just beautiful, the wording, the curiousity, the mood it gives. ;_;
Your writing has this elusiveness to it, like I'm wading through a swamp or something. Like I'm going to miss the meanings if I don't read carefully enough. I love how their conversations are so concise everytime they meet, the way they are connected and the way they start to learn about eachother at the end.
I've never read a C-Clown fic before (all I know is one of my friend likes them), but this was a great first experience for one ;_;

Gah, no words can describe how much I love this. THE FEELS, OH FEELS. Great job and I'll make sure to check out more of your other stuff 8D!
FeyFan
#2
Chapter 7: I dont know the boy before...
nvm, i can try to search bout him..
beside, this is cool!
rochesterambles
#3
Chapter 7: AWWWW WHAT IS THIS I LOVE IT ;A; You are such a good writer; you always make me want to cry or idk to bang my ahead against the wall. ;~; <33

This is beautiful. I love the mystery and beauty of Jieun. ;~; You described her perfectly. Good job, once again, friend. :3

All the best for the contest! 8D
rochesterambles
#4
Chapter 3: I love the last sentence. :(((
rochesterambles
#5
CRACK COUPLE I LIKE ALSKJDHFLAJ

I LOVE JIEUN OH MY GOSH and oh my gosh they actually will look good together idk why I just see it

<33