contagio(us)

Description

they wanted storms to shake the earth, so they waited to hear the thunder.

 

 

 

Foreword

a/n: wow, it's been a while since i tried to actually sit down and create something that wasn't less than 300 words ;_; where has time gone? going back to my crackship roots here with seungah/kiseop that i haven't really picked up since who knows when orz. 

 

my entry for the Cherry Blossom Prelude Writing Contest (didn't end up needing the extension, i think?) using this lovely prompt:

"What we call the beginning is often the end. And to make an end is to make a beginning. The end is where we start from."  - T.S. Elliot

 

warning: rated for mild profanity. 

 

 

 

 

 

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Ohreos-
#1
you are my new favorite author. this is my new favorite oneshot. ever. wow.
ethereals #2
Chapter 1: Wow, Sapphy, this was like, story in a nutshell. Really. Just - you didn't use many words, but those words were so, so beautiful.
I find myself shipping into this, but then again, I should stop ships where I only know the male part. LOL.
runningman21 #3
Chapter 1: wow, this was...just really good. I don't have appropriate words to describe how wonderful your writing is. I felt like I was living every moment with the characters. you told us so much by saying so little. I really hope you write more stories.
ErisChaotica
#4
Chapter 1: You, my friend, are a master at minimalism. T_T With art, less is more, they say. It's amazing how you can say so much through so little, and not a wasted word to be found. This is showing, not telling, at its best. *fangirls*
devilgirlmaria
#5
Chapter 1: beautiful so beautiful
kanqwu
#6
Chapter 1: It's so beautiful and sad. I really like the story of it though. Very nice and flowing. I also like how you repeat phrases throughout. ^.^