Fourteen Steps to Happiness

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Happiness.

What is happiness? Yumi thinks as she stares at the ugly, dark red slowly trickling down her forearm.

She sacrificed a lot to be perfect. But maybe she sacrificed too much.

Why are you so happy? Yumi thinks as she stares at the tall, chestnut haired boy grinning back at her.

He’s determined to make her happy. No matter what.

 

But people forget that happiness doesn't last forever. 

Forever is just a word.

He knows this best, but he can't help it.

 

"I'm so sorry Yumi...this wasn't supposed to happen."

 

Foreword

 

 

Characters:

 

♥Lee Yumi (17)♥

The 'perfect' girl whose only escape from pressure and depression is a sharp blade.

 

 

♥Park Chanyeol (17)♥

The always-cheerful 'Mr. Perfect' of the school campus whose living his life to the fullest. 

 

 

♥Kim Jongin [Kai] and Oh Sehun (17)♥

     

Chanyeol's friends. The introvert and the extrovert.

 

A/N:

Yeah the tags say it but basically it's a mixture of fluff and angst. Hope you enjoy! :)

♥Credits to ♚ ♥ angelic hearts graphic request shop ♥ ♚, exoapplesauce, and especially HNsenpai for such a lovely poster♥

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Author's Thoughts
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Mini-Hiatus until mid-May because EXAMS and I want to finish my other story. I really want to focus on this one so let me finish the other one :)
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selectedvips #1
Chapter 7: Please save her at all cost, dear Chanyeol. Yumi should listen to her teacher and Chanyeol. She needs to let herself free of any insecurities and worries in life. She may be a good student but she has insecurities and I hope Chanyeol will be able to help her overcome it. Her scars would be etched onto her skin for eternity. But the inner scars can heal through time. Ah my thoughts are everywhere! I just love this story so much and want her to end up with Chanyeol.
There. I made my point.
selectedvips #2
Chapter 5: How do people generally define perfection? I think in Yumi's case, her scars are her insecurities, and yet they can also be her perfection. Because no one is completely flawless in this world, Yumi isn't perfect in all aspects as well. I just hope someone *coughchanyeolcough* can and will see through her. :) amazing job so far!
Jimmyliu #3
Love it Thornim ^^ keep up the great work ^^

i saw this tagged as Angst and i have several theories why this story is angst, please tell me my theories are not correct :'( regardless i really like your story ^^
selectedvips #4
Chapter 4: Good luck on your exams! And in all honesty, I'm not offending or judging anything about you or this story, but usually third person perspective allows the reader to get a better insight of all characters rather than just one. First person POVs aren't that bad either but in my opinion, it's much more difficult to write because you want to express the character's feelings and thoughts more. Anyhow, I really like this story and even if you changed the structure and whatnot, I'll still be reading this :D
-natsukim #5
glad you like the poster^^
selectedvips #6
Chapter 2: This is so far interesting. I hope to understand more about her feelings through the story and see some change in her.
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