TheNSO | Your Everything 

Title | 5/5 | Awesome! It suits the story very well (:

_{Description | 5/10 | Need a bit more in depth of the story, remember to use correct grammar c:}

_{Foreword | 7/10 | Ow my hand.. Oh sorry ^^ Decribe the characters more and maybe put the trailer in}

_{the description :3}

Appearance | 5/5 | It's so awesome I can't explain. *-*

Originality | 7/10 | I think I've seen this plot before... Sorry! D:

Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation | 11/15 | I've seen a lot of grammar mistakes and others. (Your spelling is perfect by the way c: ) For your title, it's meant to be You're Everything. Description - There is a .... (four period) and it's meant to be three periods (...) You did C.A.P on your first chapter but the rest you made it CAP. You typed in, "I think about him almost every seconds !" My correction is "I think about him almost every second!" And make sure before, a comma (,) a period (.) a question mark (?) or an exclamation mark (!) or any others don't do a space. You typed in "Are you serious ! You like that monster CAP ?" My correction is, "Are you serious?!? You like that monster, C.A.P?!" You also typed in a sentence, "i think you are sooooo not his type" My correction, "I think you are so not his type." The i has to be capital. You typed in homeworks, while I correct it as homework. Okay I'm done this category -u-''

Flow | 7/10 | I think the problem happened too early :P

Message | I think you should read my Grammar etc. (lazy to type) and correct it ^^

A/N Thank you again to choose my review shop ^^ I don't have homework this week so this is like my homework c: Please credit. I think I typed too much in this chapter. And also, I changed the style, do you think it's good?