CoolerThanYou - Thirst Of Blood

Title - 3/5

Originality is good, I never seen a fanfic called Thirst Of Blood...because it's not a lot of chapters, I need to know why it's called Thirst Of Blood, 3/5 ^^

Description - 7/10

Good description, maybe have a good catch to make the viewers/readers want to read it more :3 7/10 for me.

Foreword - 6/10

Pretty good, just describe the characters a bit more. A good 6/10 ^^

Appearance - 3.2/5

The bottom of the poster is a bit blank. Need a background too ^^ 3.2/5 :3

Originality - 9/10

I've never seen this plot before...but I have seen a similar one.

Spelling - 5/5 Nothing wrong with your spelling. Grammar - 4.3/5 When Onew was talking about the chicken and the members were staring at him you typed in, 'Staring. And keep staring.' My correction, 'Staring and staring."  Punctuation - 5/5 Nothing wrong with your punctuation. ^^ Total - 14.3/15 for English

Flow - 5/10

It's too slow, chapters are okay. Might have to write more chapters (or write [hiatus] or [busy] next to the title) 5/10 ^^

Total - 47.5/65

Message - Make sure you check your grammar, check typos and maybe make more chapters. ^^ Thanks for choosing Ukissme1's Review Shop.