Wishing On A Star

Description

God what am I even doing here? I have exams in less than a week and here I am writing another story O.O' Not even finishing/updating my other ongoing stories but writting a new one!

But I am kind of fed up of studying biology and physics right now...so yeah what better way to relieve stress than to write Ontae? LOL

So yeah....another story...I shall upload the whole thing tomorrow I think...

 

( p.s....I edited the lame picture thing....sorry for it's lamenes....I'm not a good editor...LOL)

Foreword

Well...

There's a saying that if you wish under a shooting star, it comes true. If it's true or not, that can be debatable.

However, Taemin wants to believe that this is true because he really, really needs his wish to come true...

Would he be able to wish for Onew's love under the starry night sky...more importantly will his wish come true?

And what would Onew wish for?

 

(even afetr 13 fictions here...I still at descriptions and forewords...lol...mianhae!)

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shinyan #1
"... Taemin rested his head on Onew's chest, right above where his heart was beating frantically. He softly murmured, 'You are mine, only mine.'"

This is something you've used a couple times, speaking directly to a heart or personifying it (in this case, Onew even does so himself). I like how you give it life in your stories in a way you don't normally see.
Taeminmypants #2
Chapter 1: Oh my god this is just so adorable I can't even quote which line I like the most T_T
ixButterfly #3
Chapter 1: I read the first para~ Seems really good
Gonna finish reading it all tmr~ :D
Mllapin10 #4
Chapter 1: Nya~ Love Onew and OnTae~ I usually ship OnHo but this one was so cute and all.
I really loved to read your story, I really have nothing to say much than that : so sweet and love your writing style ! (just so perfect for fluff~)
yhen2x #5
Chapter 1: fluff, fluff, flufffff
alwaysBeWithYou #6
Chapter 1: awwww ontae... what am i going to do with u??? stop making such sweet stories... i'm going to have diabetis salma...
anyways good luck for ur exams :)
onewjoo #7
Chapter 1: awwww~ another amazing and adorable story by the great author dubuislove! Your stories always make my feels overflow, I think I might melt at the sweetness I just read ^-^
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