If Only ...

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If only the one person you love feels the same way. But you know that is impossible since you were just a nobody while he was a guy who all the girls threw themselves at. You weren't as pretty as all the other girls anyway so you thought you didn't even stand a chance at all. If only ...

Foreword

This is my first fanfic / oneshot so please don't hate! :D I am very sorry that it is very short! I'll make longer ones later on ...

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Park_HyeSun #1
Chapter 1: The story's okay. And hmm, usually people don't hate on stories I think. I could be wrong about that perception though. ^^;

Actually, it's not about length. It's about having enough storyline and flow to present it. (: In my opinion, space your story a little into a few paragraphs - I think five will do? - and it'll make it easier to be read, and pique more interest.

You can put up a picture/poster/et cetera too if you want. It garners more interest, especially to those who judge a book by its cover. (In this case, oneshots/fanfics. /nods/) However, at the end of the day, a person writes because they enjoy doing so. Nothing more, nothing less. ^^

I hope you won't get upset or offended at my comment. If I have... I really sincerely didn't mean to do that. ;~;
DaeJi_LuMi #2
Chapter 1: Love it the story was amazing it's is almost the same as my life when i got a crush on one of the kingka in my school ....
NhuLinh #3
This is an amazing story to me. I want to inspire you. Author Jim I hope you do more stories. I will always read your stories. People may think they are crappy and they don't give a crap but I will always love them. But you should make your stories a little longer. :)
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