Sweet smell of coffee

Description

Just another morning in the coffee shop I liked so much. Yet behind the counter was not the person I expected to see.

Foreword

Here, just stare at this heart <3 to lazy to write a forword :P

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Eliiana #1
Chapter 1: This is cute ^^.. Given that your mother tongue is not English, you did a good job .. I could read perfectly..
I said I'd read so here I am ^^, I hope you write more and that a big smile appear on your lips while you write, because it comes from the bottom of your heart.. I know it's boring write and have no comment, but once in a while someone comes along ..And of course it appears those important people who always support us ^^
Well, I think this comment is getting big so I'll stop here ..
Chingu, fighting :D
erialc #2
Chapter 1: Awww that was so cute! :D it was really well written, you have urged me to look up Zelo now. Good job :D I really enjoyed it!
Park_HyeSun #3
Chapter 1: Well, trying your best did pay off, in my honest opinion. It's a decent and simple read. (: Your mastery of the English language is pretty okay, compared to some AFF users who claim that the said language is their first ._.

However... You do have odd typos. An obvious one is the fact a number 2 is written there. XD (It was something like /you2re/ I think. Somewhere... It's a number 2 I believe. ;~;)
nyankat_rina #4
Chapter 1: English is not your first or second? But your English is fine to me! :o There are a few errors but they're fine. Many people do those kinds of mistake. Cute story btw. ^-^

I got a shock at first when the girl's name is Karina. I thought it was my name, Katrina. Haha. XD
harmonyme #5
Chapter 1: OMG !!! I LOVE IT ><" .... it's so awesome K . and btw , your English is way better than mine ;)
Nainah #6
Chapter 1: cute!! just like you :) lol i really liked it! it was lighthearted and fluffy and im looking forward to more of you work xx
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