The Right Moment.

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Life was always a matter of waiting for the right moment to act - Paulo Coelho.

 

Baekhyun//Soojung//Jongin//Sooyeon//Kyungsoo

 

 

 

cr. Tumblr, nippynorth, ffy.

Foreword

 

“Take care of Soojung for me,” Jongin whispers into his ears and gives one last squeeze.

“No, you’ll do that. You promised to come back. Not a second later ok?”

 

“Just do it.”

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bubblerabbit #1
Chapter 2: Kaistal sad end :')
coercion #2
Chapter 2: s Obs speechless tbqh.
ararearaya #3
Chapter 2: this is... so beautiful. i don't know how to put it in the word. it's just... so beautifully writed. i do feel Kai'll die in the end but didn't realize about that watch-thingy. :))
this is definitely will be my favorite ones.
thanks for making such a beautiful story, authornim.
arcadian #4
Chapter 2: why do you have to kill himmm :( this is so depressing :/ still. good job, I love it!
jellyfriedgreen7 #5
Chapter 2: Great story! I don't know, after reading chapter 1, I was really hoping all of them would survive, but reading the end of this, I didn't feel heartbroken with Jongin's death. I think you brought the plot around well enough to imply that sort of good passing in death. Does that make sense?? :)
Regarding the references used in the story, I have to admit, some of them were very very good, like the MAMA reference, Jongin's watch, and his lies, but the others weren't as great.
Overall, this was great to read, and I think it'll inspire me with my story too!
Hopefully we'll see more work from you soon!^^
-surrealism #6
Chapter 2: oh my ... this story is good. woman ..... you did not disappoint me okay. i love angst and it's well written. really really well written. <3 <3 <3 post more one-shots, i would love to read them. i still feel sad over jongin's death though ..... he's a good son.
e-mermaid #7
Chapter 2: This is so beautifully written. This is the second time I'm actually crying over a fanfic.
KrystalHana #8
Chapter 2: Jongin died ;AAAAAA;
I was kinda glad though that there was a chance Baekhyun died in the first chapter. But then Jongin was the one who encountered death. Angst is so cruelly beautiful ;___;
addictedtofx #9
Chapter 1: This is really great! Love the idea and the writing style (and the pairings ofc :P )
jellyfriedgreen7 #10
Chapter 1: Hello! My sister recommended this to me and I'm really glad I came!! It's such an unexpected story, the end of the world happening just like that. I shouldn't, but I hope they survive. I'll be waiting for the next update~!
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