Chapter 2: I know i'm kinda off late...super late? keke
I just want to say that this is amazing.. It's perfect <3
It seems to describe me though, being the little stalker watching her crush. Heh, you did well!:)
Chapter 1: I really want a sequel. It reminds me a bit of a manga I once read...that also had an open ending so I hope you can make a real happy ending in a sequel :) anyway I kinda get the feeling you're describing Kris and not Luhan. With the ____ face...Kris wears a ____ face...
Chapter 1: I like how you write this story. It's well written and I like how you describe how the main character thinks and feels. But it shouldn't have ended already on this point, which makes this story doesn't have any part/punch line. You should continue this story :)
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