Where are you 넌 어디에

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I wrote this story like when Block b made a comeback and I had nothing to write about then I heard the solo song of Tae il and bam!My brain started to work!But the story is weird and short because I was writing it without amy thought.Mental breaker type of story. Personally I don't like what I wrote but still,I found it and had nothing to write now so THIS IS IT.Please read it^^ Comment Pls.(- -)(_ _)

Foreword

Mental break...
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kaiohtic #1
Chapter 1: I think the whole idea, the plot has potential, but the style of writing needs some improvement. I'm not a good author myself, so I can't really judge you, so please don't take my criticism the wrong way! >____<
anyways, I think what you need to practice more is descriptive writing. You don't need to write too detailed, because I know how difficult it is to write in a language that is not your native language. But I think you can improve if you just write as much as possible!^^
don't feel discouraged at my words, okay?

oh, and I think people who can't read and understand Korean.. it would be good if you explained the things you wrote in Korean!
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