guilty of wanting more

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"Hyukjae is dream and reality"

 

guilty of wanting more

Hyukjae/ Kyuhyun | AU | Slight!Angst | 1634 words

this is a fic written for the 'write on my wall game'. the words were: dream, reality, more,friends,kiss, every,jealousy,breathe,hope,time and open. this fic is dedicated to those who participated in the game- -thank you!- -but it's especially dedicated to my friend Tsuki-Ah. (This fic is....stupid. I'm so repetitive and this fic seems an ugly copy of my other one-shot. Gah.)

this is not proof-read. not yet. as usual. again.i'm sorry.

 

Foreword

 

Excerpt:

Hyukjae blinks, Hyukjae's eye is red because he rubbed it too much, Hyukjae has chocolate mustache, Hyukjae says Kyuhyun's irritating, Hyukjae says Kyuhyun is the best, Hyukjae says Kyuhyun to off, Hyukjae asks Kyuhyun to stay. Hyukjae cries, Hyukjae's lips go up,Hyukjae,Hyukjae,Hyukjae.

 

Thank you for reading. (also,the Kyuhyuk photo doesn't belong to me. credits to the owner.)

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de_jarje #1
Chapter 1: I love this, am EunHae shipper, but hell i love this KyuHyuk...hahahaha....
starfish12345 #2
Chapter 1: . . .
it's soooo good!!
u r so romantic!!
i really love this part " hyukjae is teh dream in Kyuhyun's reality and the nightmare in kyuhyun's dreams. he's beautiful both in dreams and in reality, but at night, he's just a beautiful nightmare."
<3 <3 <3
EunHae986 #3
Chapter 1: Your idea of cliche is good^^
hehe I love the story, and because this time it's Kyuhyun that yearns for Hyukjae. I can see every so often stories where Hyukjae has the one-sided love.
Thank you^^
purpleungu #4
Chapter 1: I love reading this...it's kind of when u're letting go of all your hopes, gives up on what want..but suddenly hope doesn't want to give up on you...
eseech #5
Chapter 1: Did I tell you how much I love your writing?

Oh god if I were this good my life would be complete.

You are so good I can't even begin to describe everything I liked about this.

I liked how you called their story cliche but when I was reading it it didn't feel like a cliche and it sounded sort of sweet and I love how when Hyukjae kisses Kyuhyun the words start to speed up and how when I read this I'm just so ridiculously inspired by your writing and did I tell you how much I love your writing?

You told me I was good. I'm not. I'm telling you that you're an amazing, wonderful, funny and witty writer. You are.

"Just pretend it's nothing. You're good at that."

WELL THEN AMBRA. WOW. WAY TO KILL MY HEART AND OMFG THAT WAS THE MOST MEMORABLE ONE-LINER OF THE ONESHOT IF I HAD TO CHOOSE BUT TBH I COULD QUOTE ALL OF THIS LIKE IT WAS SHAKESPEARE.

But yeah, I really liked this :)
eunhyukjae #6
Chapter 1: ah i've been wanting to write this kind of story! >.< the plot is...ah, almost similar...but different...ah... (i shouldn't write it here -.-" sorry!)
but this is nice, hearbreaking also... :'(
your choice of words is nice.
so they ended up...? being friends, stranger, or whatever it is except lovers?

waiting for your fluffy christmas fic! :)
Tsuki-Ah #7
Chapter 1: This is really good, isn't stupid but very nice.
The feeling of how Kyuhyun is feeling about Hyukjae is there, and even when he wants to give up, he can't. I love you girl! I want to hug you right now.
shivyn #8
Chapter 1: this is sooooo good.,unbelievably good. usually when i read fics i find myself finding faults in them or thinking it may be better some other way but this is just perfect...master writer
lore12na #9
Chapter 1: I have to quote this line "Hyukjae is the illusion of being able to touch the fireworks" it's wooooooooooooow. it gives me the idea. dream and reality. the open ending is the perfect way to finish this fanfic.
*bows* you're great. you're the greatest.
michikokasiumi #10
Chapter 1: HWOOOOOOOOO... O_o
Its coooooool >0<
waaaw.. what a one shot... ('0')
great one shot!!!
thank kyu 4 sharing...
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