Blinded

Description

Love hurts just like frost bite hurts. It's funny how we all love snow but we hate the lasting feeling of pain snow brings. I will continue to use this metaphor do you can understand the world. Snow, to me, is a representing thing. With its reflection in the mirror looking like children laughing from snowball fights and a couple kissing in the white frost it's not a surprise snow is loved. However read this story and see a new perception on this thing that we all love and watch as I continue to compare this to life. 

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Authors Note: I normally don't write these kind of depressing stories but I wanted to try something else. Hopefully you like the overall dark winter feel. Sorry if it's too serious lol. I don't have hatred against humans lol. 

Foreword

This is for this contest: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/336380/outside-the-box-writing-contest-contest-shinee-superjunior-writing-you-writingcontest-exo

I hope you enter too! Please enjoy my story and comment below on your opinion! ^_^ 

"A lot of people like snow. I find it an unnecessary freezing water." Carl Reiner 


 

     Winter describes the dark spirits of the tainted souls of people. The snow that is so easily called beautiful until described by the words simply water frozen. People call things beautiful simply by the thought of looking at the fluffy memories of snowmen and snow angles. Wait until your under a feet of snow with no way out. Try to feel the freezing ice beneath your feet. Your eyes tell lies. Snow is frozen water. Though water is needed for everyone to live. Water you can drown in. Water you can die if you are without it. What causes snow to form? The winter air that describes the people of this world. You judge people on looks and appearances and then blame the air, say you hate winter so much when these very people who you've stated with all your might as beautiful, as innocent- break that precious heart of yours. People are as naive as they are evil. I hate winter because of the continuous similarities between people.
          Two people. Two people who may be lovers, friends, enemies come together by fate. I found two people who became one of the above but we all know how they started. As people they were ignorant, conceited, and by no means ready to face fate. Winter brings on the frozen water. Do these two people.. Oh what were they called again.. Oh yes.. Jaejoong and Minhae have the blinded eyes? Will YOU, the reader, see the frozen water or the snow? Well.. Let's begin as I narrate the story of the snow and the frozen water and how they relate. 

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claribelmiranda #1
Chapter 17: Done reading this one anyways ^^
softmist
#2
Chapter 17: Omo~ You finally finished!
Zakusama
#3
Chapter 6: Wow.. author, I LOVE your writing style. This story is deep and lovely and sad at the same time, love it. Fighting!