The Short-Haired Rapunzel

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                                 Rapunzel,Rapunzel let down your hair,so that I may climb the golden stair

                                  My prince I shall let down my hair but if the witch caught us,she'll punish us

      Rapunzel was known to have golden hair,as she live in a tower and the witch uses her hair to gets in the tower.Her hair was supposed to be blonde or yellow in colour-but the reality;her hair is brown.

       Rapunzel didn't have long hair,she cuts her hair.The evil witch was supposed to be evil and old and nasty-but the reality;she's adorable,pretty and very fashionable.

     Her prince was supposed to be brave and adventurous as he saves Rapunzel from the high tower,and he falls down and..he turn blind.And Rapunzel's tears make him could see again.

    Who in the world would believe that kind of cheesy story,and fact:Rapunzel's prince is very gentle and he hates adventure.He feels save in his castle and didn't want to travel like that prince in Rapunzel's fake story.

                               Rapunzel,Rapunzel show me the secret door, so I could save you from the freaking tower 

                               My prince I shall show you the secret door ,but if the witch caught us,order some tombstones 

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Foreword

Main Actor 

>>The Princess

Rapunzel was pretty and caring?Scratch that.As you could see,she was pretty..but she's not caring.She only thinks of herself and throws things across the rooms when something makes her mad.

>>The Prince

The prince as you know is adventurous and brave,and handsome.But Prince Yixing?No,he's not.He's gentle and doesn't want to hurt people.He didn't learn how to fight,he read books about dragons and its species.

>>The Antagonist

She was supposed to be old and evil,aren't she?But no.As you can see,she's adorable,fashionable and she's young.She teaches Rapunzel many things and didn't want Rapunzel to get out of the freaking tower.

>>The Prince Helper

Luhan,was not included in the fake story.He,however played a quite important role in the real story of Rapunzel.He helps Prince Yixing the most in the story.

 

>>Unwanted Princess 

My first story,and I hope so much that you guys will like it.A story about twisted version of Rapunzel.Truth be told,I like fairytales and one quote I create myself is:

"Happily ever after do exist but not as easy as in the storybooks."

>>Cr:Syeraa,Dream Postershop.

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sikbbang
#1
Chapter 2: Okay,update or I kill Lay..Muahahaa..xD
sikbbang
#2
The story sounds quite interesting~love ze plot and how u twist le story..