✎ 〈 i m i s s y o u ♡ 〉”

Description

 

 

                           on a sunny day of winter.

no matter how long the time passed,you're still here in my heart.
whenever I hear that song,I still see the picture of us.
the days of ours,just like the blooming flower,the love of the youth
we have grow up as the time passed,I just wonder how are you doing in this bright day.
out of all people,it is only you who remains in my heart.
just wanna say even I know that you will never hear.
"I miss you"

 

Foreword

 

 

 

  'h e'                     's h e'

 

                                                                                                                                               

그  노 래 를  틀  때 마 다
오 늘 도  네  생 각 에 
이  거 릴  걷 다 가  돌 아 서 네
 
w h e n e v e r  I  h e a r  t h a t  s o n g . . . 
t o d a y , I  t h i n k  o f  y o u
o n  t h i s  s a m e  r o a d , a n d  t u r n  b a c k
 
                                    
 
                                           
 
 
 
 
title ›› i miss you
author ›› eundere
rate ›› pg / 13+
genre ›› romance
inspiredby » 1 | 2 | 3 | 4
reviewby » metricconstellaion 92/100
angelboice 97/100

 

 

 

(c) eundere 2012

 

 

eundere
done.

Comments

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Ohreos-
#1
Chapter 2: omg. this was so pretty and so sweet and so perfect and just so slice of life. <3 gosh, how did I NOT see this before? so perf. <3 thank you for this.
Park_HyeSun #2
Chapter 2: This story is likable. It's simple and understandable, and I like how both of the chapters end with the same line. It is more impactful that way, I believe.

As for errors, they are few in number. Some tenses are being mixed, but I understand that it is a hard thing to master. Some words have been misspelled, such as (scenary) when it should be (scenery). All in all, nevertheless, it's a lovely piece. Nice one, ^^
--doyouhearme #3
Chapter 2: Nice short story! ^^
PandaHyoHyuk #4
Chapter 2: So lovely!
Typical-Singaporean
#5
Chapter 2: Awww~ This is sooo sweet and cute~ <33
MinHyukie ^^
polariskpop #6
Chapter 2: The words are soo small... T T but i manage to read them, i like the story :)
mickeywithoutears
#7
Chapter 2: awww this is so sweet <3 so happy they get to meet again :)
Typical-Singaporean
#8
Chapter 2: Oh! You updated! I will read this another time~ ^^ A bit busy now~ ><
oHRaiNdRop
#9
Chapter 1: it's feel good..