Bulletproof Love

Description

 Key wakes up one morning with the sad wash over of regret.

 

 

 

 

*beta read by my friend fany

**this story is inspired by the song Bulletproof Love (henceforth the title) by pierce the veil (listen here) and has a similiar plot to my Gtop oneshot. This is however much more darker and it's written differently, in terms of the writing style.

 

word count: 2823

rating: r

Foreword

 

 

 Key uses his thumb to ooze out more blood because the color soothes him, and then presses harder, oozes out more and just watches the blood dripdripdrip into the pale white sink.

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iloveyoualways #1
I loved this story! That last line made me all TToTT Jonghyun how could you??? It was amazing, I'm sure I could re-read this multiples times
ShiningTaemint #2
This is just fantastic. I know that doesn't sound like anything at all but...I don't even know. You got me with this one. You got me with this chunk of words--this utterly fantastic chunk of words (it's a fantastic story is what I'm trying to say).

Also I love Bulletproof Love and I am an avid fan of Pierce The Veil so that just gives you, like, ten thousand more points of awesome ^^;;
BlingingLockette #3
Chapter 1: This is just.. wow.. I'm wordless, honestly
It was sooo good!! Like, so good that I wish I could quote everything.. I absolutely love your writing style, the idea, how realistic it all seemed..

I'm really jealous of the way you described things - I mean everything was clear even without writing every detail out. The struggles he (they) faced, their feelings.. Everything was just perfect.

I also loved the fact that the story wasn't predictable. It was totally unique, you couldn't guess what would come, how things would change. The flow of sentences seemed unpredictable, but so logical at the same time. The thoughts, the actions - they managed to surprise me but then again I could definitely relate myself to him. And that's just... I applaud to you.

My favorite part of this amazing story must've been the scene where they were watching a film (because wow, the struggle, the feelings.. I have no words) and also there was a sentence about fallen off button that somehow affected me more than everything else (don't ask me, I have no idea):
... because it was a present from Jjong and so he needs to fix it, fix it right, fix it back properly again.

I'm sorry for way too long comment but I just couldn't help it.. It's such a pleasure to read a well thought out and beautifully written piece like this.. Thank you for writing this!! >3
jess_mmam #4
Chapter 1: Jjong, this bastard!! I know it's life but those empty promises broke my heart (and killed Bummie's)! The nerve to come at Bummie's office with Tae... the nerve to leave him without explanations (just a ing note)... the nerve to make love to him when he doesn't feel the same anymore... He's the definition of "The bastard" mothers fear for their daughters to meet!!

The last sentence shot straight to my heart! TT_TT

Thanks for sharing, really! <3
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