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(Stories with 91% or higher)

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Mr. and Mrs. Choi by QueenYG_
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AnchovyxMiki
#1
Username: AnchovyxMiki
Story Title: Underneath the Mask
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/348508
Rated/ Yoai/ Yuri/ / None: None
Story Genre: Tragedy, sad, romance
Reviewer: Cherrylisa
Extras: A two-shot story for contest that I entered. Hope you like it
paradisease
#2
Chapter 1: Username: teukdeulmyun
Story Title: Height-ers' Woes (His Day of the Month)
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/442957/1/height-ers-woes-exo-kaisoo-suyeol-height
Rated:
Story Genre: Romance/Fluff (I don't really know lol)
Reviewer: Everlasting_Cloud
Extra: I'm requesting to review for a drabble only. ^^ Thank you in advanced!
MissyQ
#3
Username: MissyQ
Story Title: Final Call.
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/428461/final-call-oneshot-romance-you-exok-kai-love-jongin
Rated/ Yoai/ Yuri/ / None: None. :) (Well other than a little vulgar language)
Story Genre: Romance
Reviewer: Anyone is fine with me .
Extras: You can take your time :) I'd like to thank you beforehand!
Kumikocchi
#5
Username: SHINeeCookie
Story Title: Survivors' Heart
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387844
Rated/ Yoai/ Yuri/ / None: Rated / / No
Story Genre: Horror/Violence/Angst/Drama
Reviewer: puffy73
Extras: Nope
Thank you!!
MyOnlyLight
#6
Thanks LOL I thought the story was just terrible in the first few chapters BUT 85/100!?
Thank you! your review just made my day!

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(P.S. It's okay, I forgot someone was reviewing this. 0.0 We all have live too, good luck in school! ;D)
trixyBee
#7
Username: trixyByuri
Story Title: Every Single Step
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/369665
Rated/ Yoai/ Yuri/ / None: rated for violence
Story Genre: angst, psychological
Reviewer: puffy73
Extras: Thank you! :3
MyOnlyLight
#8
Username: Sjohnson2
Story Title: The Adventures of Deer Boy
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/349761/the-adventures-of-deer-boy-adventure-comedy-exo-exok-exom-luhan
Rated/ Yoai/ Yuri/ / None: None (But has One Rated Chapter)
Story Genre: Adventure, Comedy
Reviewer: cherrylisa ;D
Extras: I need someone other than myself to read my Fic PLZ LOL I think it's okay is it? =/