Chapter 1: i just started a story casting seohyun for twin sisters, and then i saw this.. this is a nice story!!

i haven't uploaded any chapter of my own story with seohyun playing roles of twins yet because i'm still polishing other characters. myungsoo's also there, coincidentally.. kekeke we have different plots though

btw, i really loved this story! i'm a myungseo shipper

Chapter 1: I love how you put Seokai and MyungSeo in this :D

Chapter 1: I love this story and myungsoo's so sweet

Chapter 1: LOL!
I always thought that Kai and L look alike, and i put SeoKai as my ultimate OTP
and now whattttt XD
i got suprised you put SeoKai and MyungSeo here XD
kyaaaaaa
make more please :D
but i think it's better if you just use one Seo Joo Hyun XD

Chapter 1: Since this story's main focus is on the two sisters, we don't get to see things from Kai's and Myungsoo's perspectives in order to learn some more about the girls. This part could've been expanded if this is a multichaptered fic.

Some noticeable grammar mistakes that I've spotted are your misusage of "me" and "their." The word "my" should've been used in place of "me" when it's referring to something belonging to a person. In place of "their" in one sentence, it should've been "they're" (the contraction of "they are") since it sounds like a subject should be there. It must be easy for you to get confused if English is not your first language.

This is different from most stories that have happy endings where all things turn out positive and problems are resolved. In reality, not all things turn out the way that we want or expect in the end. It seems that this fic touches upon that. It's a good point that I find about your writing.

Chapter 1: With Myungsoo by her side, she must've sensed that things would turn out well for her. It's good that she willingly let herself slowly learn to love him. It is rewarding to be loved wholeheartedly by someone like him. At least, it's a happy ending for MyungSeo.

At the point when it's nearing the end of the story, it seems that it happened too fast. The transition from one point to the next seems rushed. It doesn't make sense for Joohyun and Kai to be married already since he just went to confront Seohyun about the matter of switching places with her twin. The time frame there doesn't make it plausible. Since his heart was still set on Seohyun and getting her to go back with him, it doesn't sound logical that he'd be married to Joohyun. A time skip is something that you should've included before Myungsoo drove her to his home for a meeting with their families to discuss about their marriage.

It's accurate that selfishness is a result of one's own desire rather than love. This is in the same sense as a thirst for power leading to corruption. For Joohyun, it's about what she really wants that got her to make this decision by herself without going to her sister or anybody about it. She didn't think about anyone but herself. It was her inner desire speaking for her. That is what led to her downfall. If she truly has love for the people around her, she wouldn't have done anything that'd make them end up hurting--especially betraying her own sister--and there would've been another way around it. Love is selfless. It causes people to willingly care for each other and have one another's interests at heart. In order for it to be two-sided, it must be reciprocated by both parties--giving and receiving not just from one side. It's also about understanding each other's feelings.

Chapter 1: Since their biological mother is not financially capable of supporting them on her own or doesn't want them for whatever personal reason, she resorted to giving them up to an orphanage. It's a sweet reunion between the two sister when they got to see each other after seven years apart. Things were going all right at first where no one else noticed that something's off or suspect anything of either girl. The sisters got along well and were supporting each other as they kept up with their acts. It was a matter of time till everyone around them has them figured out after taking notice of their differences in demeanor and behavior. Despite the luxurious upbringing that Seohyun got from her foster parents, she doesn't end up being spoiled rotten. Seohyun also doesn't take things for granted. This is proven when she didn't seem to be as effected as Joohyun was as soon as she stepped into her sister's living environment. She has a pure heart to care (even deeply) about those around her. Obviously, Joohyun, however, is the opposite. She is materialistic and seems superficial. For her to easily toss him aside just so she could marry Kai and live a luxurious life, it proves that Joohyun doesn't truly cherish Myungsoo as much as he cherished her. It indicates that she doesn't truly love him in the first place. If she truly loves Myungsoo in her heart, she wouldn't have been affected easily by Kai's kiss. Myungsoo is a sweet, loving guy who doesn't deserve to have someone like her that's not capable of loving him emotionally. What happened nearing the is a surprise. It's so sad that she betrayed Seohyun in the end for personal reasons. Knowing that he doesn't have a chance with Seohyun, Kai hopelessly turned to Joohyun so that he could be loved by her. Since she's never thought of Kai as more than a brother, there are no hard feelings on her part.

Chapter 1: Joohyun is so selfish :( but love is selfish, indeed.

At least, Seohyun didn't love Kai before, right?
And she learnt to love Myungsoo :)

Chapter 1: joohyun is really selfish!!!!!!! how could she!!!!

Chapter 1: Seokai and myungseo ! But i like seohyun and kai, joohyun with myungsoo more ! Kekkek