Stepping Out of Line

Description

In a world where everything is controlled by the government, everything must be done exactly in the same way and at the same time.
Nothing is allowed to be different.
No one is allowed to stand out as an individual.
Dare to be different and the penalty is death.
Take one step out of the line and the government will shoot you down.

Moon Jongup is tired of being oppressed. He wants to live his life out the way he wants, not the way the government wants. So when he overhears two college students planning to break out of the system, a spark of hope is lit up inside him.

He wants a revolution.
So do they.
But freedom is not what everything seems.

 

Foreword

The Rebels

 


 

 

 

 

Moon Jongup

He wants to dance,
but the government does not allow dancing.
How far will he go for his passion?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bang Yongguk

His biggest passion is music,
but not the kind the government approves.
In hatred, he is determined to lead a revolution.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kim Himchan

He plays traditional music instruments,
so the government favours him.
But he hates the way the government treats everyone.

 

 


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Jung Daehyun

He has talent for singing,
so he is forced to sing propaganda songs.
He likes it, until one day, he meets the rebels.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

Yoo Youngjae

A born genius, the government likes him.
They took him and put him to work for the system.
He knows what the system is really all about.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Choi Junhong

A middle school student,
he wants to dance, rap and skateboard.
He took up the name Zelo to show that he can fight too.

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

This is a story for a writing contest, using the first prompt:
Fine feathers do not make fine birds.
 

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wonderstruckkx3
#1
Ohhh interesting plot :D
please update soon~~